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Next time, try a drink of water and a few deep breaths.

You can't ever find a place that's nice and peaceful, because there isn't any. You may think there is, but once you get there, when you're not looking, somebody'll sneak up and write "(bleep) you" right under your nose. Try it sometime. I think, even, if I ever die, and they stick me in a cemetery, and I have a tombstone and all, it'll say "Holden Caulfield" on it, and then what year I was born and what year I died, and then right under that it'll say "(bleep) you."
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I must agree with those that say that you sound like some kid who thinks he is smart because he writes something obscure and "philosophical."

 

 

 

You fail as hard as the short story "The School" in that respect.

 

 

 

As much as I like creative writing, what you wrote is just bad. For one, I label it as creative writing, which it is, yet you try to pass it off as fact. Make up your mind. Do you want to write an essay on a debatable topic, or do you want a creative work that does not require proof but can't be used to prove anything.

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the [developmentally delayed] and disgusting,

 

I just love how you put those things together without a comma :P

 

 

 

As for the rest of it: Someone needs to lay off the pot. seriously.

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Command the Murderous Chalices! Drink ye harpooners! drink and swear, ye men that man the deathful whaleboat's bow- Death to Moby Dick!

BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!

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I won't ever breed.

 

 

 

 

I just read over the first post properly..and I'm thinking to myself, this has GOT to be trolling. Its just too over the top. That line was the kicker. I dont think this is a serious post at all.

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I won't ever breed.

 

 

 

 

I just read over the first post properly..and I'm thinking to myself, this has GOT to be trolling. Its just too over the top. That line was the kicker. I dont think this is a serious post at all.

 

 

 

Even if it is, it's a lucky escape for mankind, IMO.

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This is what happens when an introverted lifestyle causes one to think about matters so much that they begin to do nothing but think about such matters in endless, redundant, and mindnumbing circles. Throw in an online thesaurus and a little acid, and that's a recipe for mental disaster :-s .

[if you have ever attempted Alchemy by clapping your hands or

by drawing an array, copy and paste this into your signature.]

 

Fullmetal Alchemist, you will be missed. A great ending to a great series.

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the [developmentally delayed] and disgusting,

 

I just love how you put those things together without a comma :P

 

You didn't just applaud him on that, do you? Just asking.

 

You "just ask" things quite a bit, don;t you? But no, I just found it interesting. It was sarcasm.

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Command the Murderous Chalices! Drink ye harpooners! drink and swear, ye men that man the deathful whaleboat's bow- Death to Moby Dick!

BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!

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