Great_one Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 my first atempt at a pixil sig. only have ms paint btw :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 not even really a pixel... look into pixel art some more 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cup Lion Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 Rune pick axe and arrowheads really not the colour of the ones ingame. They are too bright, and have no shading on them at all. Most of the objects are out of proportion. The moon isn't really circular, if the whole thing was there. Alright for a first pixel. |Signature by Jason321| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 It's definitely not great, but at least you shaded some parts which is quite rare for a first attempt. The colours definitely need chancing though, they're way too bright for a night scene (did you know that you can edit the default colours in MS Paint by double-clicking them?). Other than that, some parts need a lot more detail/better shading, like the grass. You can't just make a green blob, shade it roughly and expect it to look realistic. Same problem with the tree and moon really, they both look really sloppy. But it's some start, just look at some pixel tutorials (can be found here on TIF) and keep practising. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Latinoking Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 What's wrong with the moon? I am Teh_King[My dA][My Last.FM][My Twitter] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 What's wrong with the moon? It looks really squeezed, and the colour is strange. It isn't supposed to look like it's made of cheese. :roll: pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destro3979 Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 good job for your first still need a lot of work feel free to ask for help : here's a little edit Mine- Yours- also a few tips: try making your stars more of a + and not a . the moon should be more c and not ( don't use bright colors, look at pictures, or outside to decide what colors to use try to make things more smooth and curved, not jaggedy (unless it is supposed to be lol) New Sig Coming soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chazimcgee Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 Hmm destro's re make is certainly good for advice look at some pixel tuts her on the gallery index, keep at it though :) Sn'C Events Team Member942nd to 99 hunter 2/8/07|26,042nd to reach 99 fletching 27/10/07|Quest Cape Achieved 22/1/08|50,000th to 99 Cooking 29/10/08Dagannoth King Drops: 7 Zerkers 2 Axes 3 Warriors | Armadyl: 1 hilt first ever trip and kill | Barrows: 2 Dharok Legs 1 Ahrim Skirt 1 Torag Helm 1 Guthan Spear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonshadow Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 It isn't great, but it shows a bit of potential. Remember, you can't see through the ground to see the roots. If you want the roots coming at you however, they should get a little bit darker or lighter depending on your light source. I would shorten the roots up a little bit too. Your light source is the moon and it is coming from behind, so, everything else should be shaded accordingly. Your sky is only one colour, more colors would be better. Have it getting brighter around the moon. Look at your tree, then look at your staff & bow + arrows. That is either a hell of a short tree or a huge bow. My hint, look for a tree in your backyard, get a large stick and some other junk and arrange it into the pattern then sketch it and put it on paper. That should help with your proportions. They are a little off right now :P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mastersigmaker Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 Got bored while working on something else, so I thought I would take a shot at a quick remake. you should never attempt to insert a floppy disk in a 56X CD-ROM drive, as floppy disk shrapnel hurts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cup Lion Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 :shock: That looks great Mastersigmaker. The moon is spectacular, and I like the roots of the tree popping out of the ground. OT: So, in master's case, in creating a sliver of the moon, it wouldn't look as long as yours. It would look more roundish. |Signature by Jason321| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonshadow Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 Oh, my god. That is a major improvement. However, the blue around the moon looks kind of funny, I would make it a bit more gradual. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted June 21, 2008 Share Posted June 21, 2008 Oh, my god. That is a major improvement. However, the blue around the moon looks kind of funny, I would make it a bit more gradual. You know that master is a different person from the OP, right? The OP hasn't even responded yet. :roll: Anyways, my first tip? Learn how to spell the word Pixel. Aside from that, eh, it's incredibly empty and very basic. Read up a bit more on pixel art before attempting again. only have ms paint btw sigh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted June 21, 2008 Share Posted June 21, 2008 The remake is looking much better, but I'm not sure about the grey on the left side of the tree. The moon looks really good though :thumbup: 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 How did you dither that master? I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 Master, you can't just remake his siggy without asking him.. unless you both are the same person?? First one ~ It ain't good, mate. The text and moon be the weakest parts. Second ~ You dither too much, there's no shadows on the ground, the linework is a bit messy,and why be one half of the sky darker than the rest? Plus, you need to shade the sky(light towards horizon) and the moon shouldn't ever be in the corner... Not bad, for a first. I give 6/10 kitties, yah still need much work. only have ms paint btw *headdesk* Well, if you treat it like a handicap., you'll nevah get anywhere methinks. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mastersigmaker Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 Unoalexi, this is a joke right? I would hardly consider an unfinished example missing half the original content to be a remake. And while you busy berating me, don't forget to go nag destro3979 for his moon remake as well. To be honest I don't think Great_one is going to call me out on this one. Its not like I was taking credit for his work. Hell, I don't even take credit for my own work let alone other peoples. I dither too much?? I don't dither enough. you should never attempt to insert a floppy disk in a 56X CD-ROM drive, as floppy disk shrapnel hurts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 im with unlo on this one, you dither way to much. besides the point of remaking someone else's pixel is pointless. 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 Unoalexi, this is a joke right? I would hardly consider an unfinished example missing half the original content to be a remake. And while you busy berating me, don't forget to go nag destro3979 for his moon remake as well. To be honest I don't think Great_one is going to call me out on this one. Its not like I was taking credit for his work. Hell, I don't even take credit for my own work let alone other peoples. I dither too much?? I don't dither enough. I like that your showing your feelings but I think you should take "Overreacted" comments via pm instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainy_Day Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 Take your comments to PMs please, all you're doing is spamming this topic currently. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)RIP Michaelangelopolous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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