Got a request from someone, who if they want can say hey thats for me, but till then will remain anoymous. So here's kind of the rough version of it:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What do you think?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and two things can anyone get me a picture of a granite shield and possible a abysal whip?

oooh very nice! I want to see final??? PLEEEEEASE?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know what a whip looks like! BUt not a shield.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Whips are like dark gray and dark redish striped!

Whips = Sausage links. :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A Granite sheild is basicly a sheild made out of rock. Don't have a picture of it though :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The line work is looking very nice. Can't wait to see the finaly version :)

abyssal whip:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

granite shield:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

images from Runehq.

I have the whip added like that when he did his dive he threw back up into the air. The shield meh, don't see where i can put it but thanks though. Anyways keep the comments coming.

clean up the fuzzy...

Wow Axe, how about learning how to read the full sentence? "this is the rough version." Nice job not reading the post.

nice sig you go going jake. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

cant wait to see final :lol:

I like it, I can kinda tell what the end result will look like so it would be nice to see.. I love the amount of action in some peoples sigs, its probably something I need to work on, with my old record of lazy body proportions I might try and make one of these to prove that Im not limited to one type of pixel sig.. Aghh but my stupid exams are starting in less than a week, I cant resist!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As soon as they finish ya better watch out, cus im gonna go pixel crazy :lol: .. Goodluck with the sig Jake.

Thanks Terley, yeah you probably will, but I got exams in about 2 weeks, and then summer vacation, I'll defenitely be able to improve even more on my work.

Whats the person on the right doing?

 

 

 

And the head of the far left man looks too small for his body.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its looking busy right now, with all the stuff happening, hopefully you can pull it off without making it look too cluttered :) I like the helmet on the middle guy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, great work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PS: Are they all wearing tank-tops?

The guy on the right is diving sort of and the whip in the updated version which i will post soon has the whip flying up in the air. And the guy on the left, that was just a basic shape so that I have something to build on, the guy now has his d medium like requested on him and his head looks normal now. Thanks for pointing that out though.

Sorry for the DP but I got an updated version.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Made the guy with the maul smaller, then i added his head, and added the whip.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry for the TP, but had to show the last and final version before it moves on to shading.

It took me some time to figure what the guy on the left was doing.. He swining a maul behind his back and about to swing the guy stabbing the other guy right?

 

 

 

His head seems to be at a bit too much of an angle..Perhaps do something with his legs, because I dont think you can really put alot of force in a swing standing like that.. Well.. At least it would be easier to swing in another leg position.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The guy holding the sword looks a bit wrong too. The way he's holding the sword that is.. Looks a tiny bit like hes thinking "Get off my sword you bloody idiot" :lol:

 

 

 

Perhaps a 2 handed stabb, I dunno :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looks pretty good though, I can;t wait to see how it will turn out. Colour can do alot.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well, this won't have much effect now, as this was the final linework, but I posted it anyways..

Not saying your wrong about the head mate, but when I played baseball I always stood like that, my legs were a little further apart but not much further, and the reason i don't got a two handed stab is cause well he's holding his shield. But I see where your coming from on this. Thanks for ya cc.

I think the head is just leaning the wrong direction. I just did a baseball swing and my tilted towards the bat. Leaning your head forward can throw off your swing. You're supposed to lean into the ball, but not move just your head like that. Tilt his head the other direction.

wow, can you do linework :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don't really see anything wrong other than the guy getting stabbed looks a little thin. Can't wait to see final :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

my attempt to color it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

my attempt to color it,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Gradient shading never looks good. It's so flat.

i think it looks really good! if the shading is good then the few problems wont be noticed!

the sheild looks like it is face the wrong way, it should be curved in not out. it all looks great though.

the sheild looks like it is face the wrong way, it should be curved in not out. it all looks great though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It is the backside of the sheild so it should be curved out, notice the strap on his arm connecting to it.

very nice tl, keep up the good work and im me the final k?

No problem, just waiting for Princess to get the time to shade it all, cause as we all very well know, I'm by no means good at shading. So that's where she comes in. Anyways, thanks for your guys comments.