You might have seen this, you might not have.

 

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Same old stuff.....

 

 

 

Bad anatomy, colors...

 

 

 

 

 

and the triangle isnt a triangle.... #-o

Pat_61 pretty much summed it up. There is little to no improvement.

I think the monster is decent at least.

 

But I pretty much agree with everyone else, and why green?

 

In my mind draconic = red.

 

That is the color that pops up right away.

It has some really unrealistic anatomy, strangely shaped legs, and odd curves and twists where there shouldn't be any, colors aren't so bad, you need to work on shading/blending them more.

 

Other than that it's alright.

Take some lessons on anatomy. Please.

 

 

 

Colours need work as well, draconic = red for me as well.

I understand why you people were surprised to see a RS picture like mines on these forums :o

 

 

 

Also, I agree with what the rest said so I won't repeat it.

Needs moar

 

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Draw what you see, not what you think you see.

Something you might want to do to work on your anatomy issues (I've been trying it and I've seen improvement): find a basic anatomy reference, a simple one is better. You may even just want something that shows where parts of the body should fall by measuring with the size of the head (you could even start out with lines and circles just to get proportioning right, I did that). Study the image for a while and look at how long the arms, legs, neck, etc are. Then put it away (under something if you have it printed or change the page if it's on the computer) and try to draw it as well as you can two or three times. Then compare with the original to see where your errors tend to be the greatest. Do the same thing again and work on the areas you were the worst in. Do that until you feel comfortable with your work then move on to a more detailed image, and so on.

 

 

 

Eventually you might want to try more dynamic poses since as of now you're doing mostly static, generic poses. Try to draw someone running, playing a sport, jumping or whatever. Right now you really need to stop focusing on what the person is wearing and start focusing on the thing wearing it. On what Nadril said, you want this to be what you see, so forget all the things you do when you draw. Look at how the head is shaped, don't just draw what you think it looks like. Study how muscles look in various positions, and how they're shaded, don't draw a lump and call it a bicep. Look at the skeletal structure of the hand, look at how the bones move when the hand opens and closes. The fingers don't just wrap around something like tentacles.

 

 

 

This is probably the longest post I've made in a year or so, so I hope it helps. Just keep trying to work on what we're suggesting. Don't take it personally, we're just trying to help you get better. Or I am at least.

Oh my god this sucks, what are you 12 years old?

Oh my god this sucks, what are you 12 years old?

Don't be so rude.

Oh my god this sucks, what are you 12 years old?

Draw a picture and post it here.

I'm going to laugh so hard if (s)he is amazing.

Oh my god this sucks, what are you 12 years old?

 

I think hawkz is actually 12.

 

That being said most 12 year olds I knew that drew/draw draw much better than this.

hawkxs is 15.

But yeah...I'm not really a fan of this style, and it doesn't seem to change much with each drawing... Try something new.

dude dont let theese people get to you! great work. other people might not think it but it takes skill to even draw like that. it might not be the best, but atleast give him constructive criticism if your gonna criticise him. if he is gonna improve he doesnt need haters putting him down.

Having people hate your work is more than enough motivation to improve.

Having people hate your work is more than enough motivation to improve.

 

I agree. If you want people to love your work you need to put in the effort.

 

ANATOMY!!! Draw from a reference as well.

 

dude dont let theese people get to you! great work. other people might not think it but it takes skill to even draw like that. it might not be the best, but atleast give him constructive criticism if your gonna criticise him. if he is gonna improve he doesnt need haters putting him down.

She*

 

Someone will always put you down. You just gotta deal with it. But some of the people here are fed up with seeing the same thing over and over with no improvements.

Oh my god this sucks, what are you 12 years old?

 

I think hawkz is actually 12.

 

That being said most 12 year olds I knew that drew/draw draw much better than this.

 

Err no? Alot of people in my class suck at drawing, and most of them are 12, with the few currently 13 (me and 1 other kid). There are like a group of good artists (5 or 6)... I cant draw like the OPer... They are good!

I'm not even going to bother criticizing the entire thing any more, but if you're going to draw something that is supposed to be somewhat straight, please, at least make it look not strangely tilted to one side (an example of this is the Draconic Mage stuff).

 

EDIT: Typo.