Bedhead1111 Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 Updated! If u view, post :3> posts for u, C&C for me :) Tell meh what you think, what i could owrk on to make it better :) V2: V1: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beesafree Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 everything seems Too perfect the log walls are perfectlly strait and look brand new, the bales of hay aren't rustled and there are no broken or useable arrows....it's just a target http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bedhead1111 Posted September 12, 2006 Author Share Posted September 12, 2006 thank you i will take that into concideration when i update it :) i knew somthing was wrong but i didnt know what Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
My_Eggs Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 yeah, i agree, it is a bit to perfect with all the straight lines and such 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alduron Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 That is a good start. If you can modify your materials and shapes as have been suggested it would be awesome. Keep it up. ~Alduron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
remoteman Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 Very nice, except for the things already commented on. What program are you using? C4d or Bryce? "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjb21 Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 perfecton - es bad, nothing is perfect. straight lines - ess bad, its not natural. good job tho, dont see ALOT of 3d images, but we still see some... hmm, i really need to hurry up and buy milkshape >< PJB21 100% my own work, i make my own brushes: set 1 set 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Biabf Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 Hmm a few suggestions: Put some arrows in the target, on the floor and on the table. The bales of hay are too perfect... The wall is too straight There is no tower after the bales of hay. Apart from that, very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 Hehe, you just brought me back memorys of a few 3D sigs I did way back in the day :oops: . Anyways, it's a good start. All you realy need now is to make it a bit more varried in texture, and probaly make the sky more belivable as well. Great job for a start :) . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
np_tyler Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 It's cool, but I don't really like the bow. Too curvy and not curved enough... :? And the target seems awfully close... - Np Tyler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pomar1 Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 Try to do it better, dont end with this form, but its good :) ----TheLair Game!----"Game isn't dead... You wish!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bedhead1111 Posted September 12, 2006 Author Share Posted September 12, 2006 i did this from memory, i havent been to teh range guild in like ever amgawd thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeeBoab Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 i think the target is too... bright i think for the rest. its good. real good. My photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bedhead1111 Posted September 12, 2006 Author Share Posted September 12, 2006 im going to try and use a bump map on the target so it looks more like clothe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilboy1034 Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 Maybe arrow marks in the target? It is just too bright to be a target like someone above me said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tehsecondone Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 the target seems a little close to me... maby ferther away and a bit smaller would be good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bedhead1111 Posted September 14, 2006 Author Share Posted September 14, 2006 Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deloriagod Posted September 14, 2006 Share Posted September 14, 2006 It's looking better ^^ You need to add arrows and broken arrows on the ground/in the target. Internet Marketing For Newbies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bedhead1111 Posted September 14, 2006 Author Share Posted September 14, 2006 thx, thats my next step, im just tired and didnt feel like doing that atm :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beesafree Posted September 14, 2006 Share Posted September 14, 2006 much better.... =D> =D> =D> BUT! letsee... +the bow needs a little work look at the in game bows and use them as reference.... +arrows would be nice maybe like 5 on the ground around the target bent, or headless. a few in the log walls behind the target. one or two sticking out of the bales of hay. a few on the target and some in the Bag... +Maybe on the log walls have a few scrathes or dents Use it or lose it http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bedhead1111 Posted September 14, 2006 Author Share Posted September 14, 2006 thx beesafree, your being very resourcefull :3> im taking it at chunks at a time...too much overwhelms me :( probly do the arros and bow tommorow then the wall later cuz it takes more time to fix material etc.. we'll see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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