Kill_Life Posted October 24, 2006 Share Posted October 24, 2006 Well, I made my best sig so far. Not so hard for most, cause my others were *crap*... Worked quite long on it... And I'm totally proud on it! I really like it. What do you guys think of it? Here is the new one: Text still quite normal, don't know how I should do it.. Again improved: Changed text: Sky changed: Without Black Line: Without black line, but in an other way: Less black borders. But I don't really like it... Changed the borders in another way... Still love it. Give whatever critism you have... As long as you really think in that way... No need to tell it's bad when you find it good :) Post! "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arthu Posted October 24, 2006 Share Posted October 24, 2006 You have the right way to go. Background and sky are mostly plain and 1 coloured, but that's fixed by just adding details. Some identical star shapes aren't enough in my opinion. Ground has some grass things, that's it? It's plain. But a good start. 99+ all 23rd March 2012 - 2496 total 13th June 2012.9000+ dragon drops! Including draconic visage, d chains, d spears, d2h, d claws, d meds, d legs, d skirts... d bones, d hides :)?I want jagex to put resource dungeons and dungeoneering skill doors to dungeoneering floors so I can dungeon and get dungeoneering xp while I dg so I don't have to dg to get dg exp, but I can dg while I dg :)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fearspudgod Posted October 24, 2006 Share Posted October 24, 2006 I like it =D http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/975/70961xn8.jpg[/img]Playing WoW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fortress2000 Posted October 24, 2006 Share Posted October 24, 2006 Nice, I especially lik the details on the stars. However, the ground needs more detail. Try annd small rock, dirt, holes, ect. Maybe more life? 7/10. =D> Writing in colour was fun while it lasted...The Tip.It. Furry! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runescapeloser22 Posted October 24, 2006 Share Posted October 24, 2006 i like it, maybe either make the characer bigger or at more stuff around him? also the text needs major work #-o p.s. i really like the tree trunk :3> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_Life Posted October 24, 2006 Author Share Posted October 24, 2006 Thx all for comment and suggestions, I'll work on it :) "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runescapeloser22 Posted October 24, 2006 Share Posted October 24, 2006 oh ye, and also make his face better (shaded, better features) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted October 24, 2006 Share Posted October 24, 2006 Its a nice start! What i would reccomend doing is working on that tree and also the gound a little... also try and stop your guy from looking like me in rl :anxious: New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted October 24, 2006 Share Posted October 24, 2006 well... -It's all so random. I can't say what is that all about -what is that mime fella' doing? those look like chinese dragon kites -it is very, very plain, barely no shading or detailing -NO BORDERS?! =; -text is horrible -what really is that brown thing in upper right corner? Positive things: -at least anatomy is right. Minimal, but right -stars look detailed, even if they are all the same star copied and they look like shurikens. keep on training :thumbsup: [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_Life Posted October 25, 2006 Author Share Posted October 25, 2006 Nope, no borders. Maybe I'll add those then. The Mime os just a favo outfit using random fire spell. And yes, text will change, when I know something fun. Face-shading will happen. Thx for comments. "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwrm22 Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 nice siggy! way bttr then that ghost... ^^ click my sig for my lesser ranging guide ^^jwrm22: 4816th > 99 cooking 100% f2p !1172 total! + 140mil in items.i dont play anymore... i think rs is ruined Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 ok. ive got a displaced bone in my wrist, and im not supposto pixel, so i will satisfy my hunger for art by ccing yours. first and formost ARGH!!!!!11111111111ONE!!!!! black borders are a big no-no. make the borders a darker shade of the color. it really only looks like you did put a border on the guy and on the ground. next. tonight, i want you to look up at the stars. how many stars look like watermellons from your house? none? i didnt think so. your stars are HUGE!. make them slammer. they also arent all the same shape. time to cc your charicter (sp) first thing i notice is taht the anatomy is CORRECT!!!! hooray! one of the first people to see here who can make a person look kinda personlike. next thing i notice is that hes using fire neer his santa hat... are you sure you want to be lighting matches neer your 30 mill hat? your burnt santahat wont fetch much on the open market, and you can quote me on that (h). like i said, the outlines need to be fixed, and i would sugest aa'ing him to make his legs more smooth. i also think that he shouldnt have a greenish shadow, mbe a dark brown or gray? it also needs to be more streched out, based on the direction the light from the moon (i assume there is a moon...) is coming from. the guys face needs some work. his skin isnt shaded at all. big thing to work on. if its not shaded, it looks bland and unfinished. his santa really needs some shading, looks terribly flat right now. same with his shirt, and arms. 2d ftl? now, i shall continue my biching with the ground. the grass is AWASOMe =p great job onit you really used some nice colors to add depth and light! the ground on the other hand is 2D!!!!! SHADING IS YOUR FREND!!!! you should have some kind of light source perferably a house, lamp, or moon, or something. the ground isnt flat. you also did a good job on the chicken things. now i shall cc the lake, and tree. first thing i notice is the pond type thing. its small. and circluar. im not really sure what its doing there. it looks rather like a portal of some sort. i think that it should be bigger. fish dont swim in puddles you know. i also think that you should show some kind of motion in the water. onto the tree. your tree is good. i li ke the style of shading you used on it. if you used that throughout your whoe piece, it would look awasome. once again, unless you are using a green light, shadows arent green. also, im not really firmiliar with the tree with leaves that go straight up. let them hang loosely down. now, i shall continue onto the fire. fires dont spread love, so why is it shaped like a heart...? im sure you wouldnt like it if i lit your stuff on fire, and you can also quote me on that (h). shading overall is good, but not in the right spot. fires start as a blueish color on the botem, then fade to white, then orange, and the tips are red. also, let it move out of that heart shape plz? now lastly, i shall cc on the sky (alsmost done lol) sky needs to be shaded. looks terrible like it is. also, it needs to be darker. it is to light as it is. i also think you should add a light source of some kind, so that your shadows can be done corectly. as a closing note, i shall sum up what we have learned today. ~playing with matches neer your santa is probably not the wiseest idea. ~stars dont look like watermellons- dont try and eat them. ~fires dont spread love, so dont draw your fire like a heart. ~just because a tree has green leaves doesnt mean the shadow is green too ~eckered is ftw, and so is his cc ~shading is your frend, use him, but dont abuse him. ~ 2d is ftw sometimes, but not when youve got 3d stuff all over the place. ~eckered is still ftw, and if you want something cced, feel free to pm me. feel free to quote any part of that you want, especally the part about eckered being ftw : :XD: :thumbsup: \ :3> 8-) :lol: :uhh: wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megadedhed Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 i guess ill be the first one not to love it..... anatomy is ok, but not "correct", as one arm is much longer then the other. the face is horrible and could use alot of work black lines are horrible and ruin the quality of the pixel. you didnt do a horible job on shading the vegitation, but the ground is a single color and by the amount of it, is the mpst noticable part....it NEEDS texture. i would also hand anti alias the guy, as it will really help bring out what you use the black lines for. Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_Life Posted October 26, 2006 Author Share Posted October 26, 2006 Thx for comments :D I'll make work of it. And I will quote you one day, lol. Also, that ain't green shadows... but maybe I should make shadows of it? "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_Life Posted October 30, 2006 Author Share Posted October 30, 2006 Improved again! "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_Life Posted October 30, 2006 Author Share Posted October 30, 2006 Been working quite a lot on it today... "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michiel2 Posted October 30, 2006 Share Posted October 30, 2006 The ''santa owner'' is still a bit difficult to read. But apart from that, he's really nice and original. :thumbsup: At least, I think that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_Life Posted October 30, 2006 Author Share Posted October 30, 2006 The ''santa owner'' is still a bit difficult to read. But apart from that, he's really nice and original. :thumbsup: Thx, and I know it's hard to read... Don't know how come, every time I type the text and insert it, it becomes hard to read... Ohwell. "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragon312 Posted October 30, 2006 Share Posted October 30, 2006 hmmz nice but get rid of the black lines they look cheap >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_Life Posted October 30, 2006 Author Share Posted October 30, 2006 hmmz nice but get rid of the black lines they look cheap >_> Done, and thx. "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megadedhed Posted October 30, 2006 Share Posted October 30, 2006 hmmz nice but get rid of the black lines they look cheap >_> Done, and thx. 1. i still see plenty of black lines. 2. on the ground randomize the dithering a bit, as it is not working at all, the ground looks diagonal Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_Life Posted October 30, 2006 Author Share Posted October 30, 2006 hmmz nice but get rid of the black lines they look cheap >_> Done, and thx. 1. i still see plenty of black lines. 2. on the ground randomize the dithering a bit, as it is not working at all, the ground looks diagonal What black lines? I won't delete the black lines of the man if you mean them. And I might try to change the floor. Thx. "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megadedhed Posted October 30, 2006 Share Posted October 30, 2006 hmmz nice but get rid of the black lines they look cheap >_> Done, and thx. 1. i still see plenty of black lines. 2. on the ground randomize the dithering a bit, as it is not working at all, the ground looks diagonal What black lines? I won't delete the black lines of the man if you mean them. And I might try to change the floor. Thx. yeah, black lines are ok for backrouds, but not guys...... (do you have a thick blick outline?) Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_Life Posted October 30, 2006 Author Share Posted October 30, 2006 Added, so what you think? I don't really think it's good, your oppinion? "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 30, 2006 Share Posted October 30, 2006 much beter imo, just possibly make thee outline a darker shade of the color being outlined. wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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