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WIP Icy Hatred. *Updated version*. I need your CC!


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Started making this for DementedHero's competition, but got a gmail account for free thanks to Hulk. Hopefully Demented wil redo the competition with a "real" prize :wink: . Anyway, the theme was to create a signature depicting an emotion. So here is my shot at some good ol' hate! :twisted:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Stopped working as I got the gmail, so it's a bit unfinished. Would like input on what to improve. (this time I might actually do it!! *gasp*)

 

 

 

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As always it's pure Photoshopping and mostly brushed.

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scary, but very nice, though i dont like the way the text is done, just my opinion,

 

 

 

harhahrhahr u endedd sennendnce with a ,,,,,, lolooolo onmg :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok that is REALLY starting to irritate me, learn to spell or dont spell at all :evil:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Back on topic, That's an awesome sig, love the way you spelt his name out :D 9/10

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Thanks Jopie211 for the sig

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Piece - Icy Hatred

 

 

 

Concept - 10/10 - To me, this piece evokes a feeling of loneliness, or that a person is lost, and he or she isn't sure how to get back on track.

 

 

 

Colours - 9,5/10 - The icy texture and colour is just... executed scarily perfect. However, if I should be super picky, I think the blood could use a darker colour. >.<

 

 

 

Effects - 10/10 - Seriously, they're just perfect. Nothing more to add. :)

 

 

 

Text - 8/10 - Eventhough what you did to the text was brilliant, I think you should incorporate it more, like someone said. Make it looke carved into the ice.

 

 

 

Cuts - The iceicle is a big turnoff, IMO. It really disturbs me. :( Reehmouve plix+?!11

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, other than that, this is probably one of your best one thus far. You did a bloody good job!! :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

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I think thats a really good piece, es purrty :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I love how the font goes round, i don't see how people don't like that idea, yeah its upsidedown making it harder to read but its so original. Maybe make the font go with the sig a bit more, the font is a bit cartoonish, like someone said more engraved into the ice, written in with the iceicle maybe 8)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice job, 9/10

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Thanks for comments everyone, especially Azvareth. Yep, blood needs a tone fix. The iceicle cut was just a lil experiment. My brother said that the sig seemed flat, so I tried to boost it. I'm planning on reworking the text, but I have a math exam tomorrow. Off topic...omg, the exam is the first I have in the university and I'm already totally lost... I was one of the best in my old school (which was the best in the country), but now I'm afraid of flunking my first test....yeoouch. :cry: :( :oops:

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Good luck on your math ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The sig looks good, it certaintly does express the feeling very good.

 

 

 

I love the idea you did with the text :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Only thing that perhaps could use some work is the blood, but that has been mentioned before ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Im not sure if I can get enough money to get a bit 'good' competition running, So Ill inform you after wednesday if Im going to make the competition or not..

 

 

 

(Im going to the Adrens(or whatever theyre called in english) from onday to wednesday)

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I like the new version, but I think I'm having some beef with the sudden color changes on each side.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The part where it slices like this: [/ /]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It doesn't really look necessary..... Maybe it's there to create an illusion of a cutoff on the ice.. but that isn't even achieved, so I think the lines are best left off... Just my opinion though, nice work on the text. Looks alot better.

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I like the new version, but I think I'm having some beef with the sudden color changes on each side.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The part where it slices like this: [/ /]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It doesn't really look necessary..... Maybe it's there to create an illusion of a cutoff on the ice.. but that isn't even achieved, so I think the lines are best left off... Just my opinion though, nice work on the text. Looks alot better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Actually, they were supposed to be taken off...just forgot. hehe. They were a part of the earliest creation steps. Weren't supposed to be included in any version.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for compliments.

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