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Looking good for a first, I would tone down the saturation of the overall peice, the colors are realy bright and kind of clash together, jsut tone down the saturation, and that might help.

Nice job, I am assuming this was made on a tablet + photoshop?

99 actually but yeah, I am saving up for one myself, and should have it in a couple of months \

swoooot....looking great Ter :mrgreen: ...you like my fadatar? :-w

are those emails?.....

how descriptive :shock:..... I like your style, and helm certiany has some unique color choices, I love his peices though, so I guess I can't complain...

Update.. Walls! I have added the start of the arena background, the bricks are a pain, but they look nice so it's worth it, havent pixeled much today, so I havent done much... I also fixed some small anatomy problems.

this is really off topic, but that inkin your sig with you playing piano, I had Trick Dady's "lets go" playing aloing with tht and it fit perfectly it was amazing :shock: anyways, I like the current WIP.

DOH! I was looking at our right :x ..thanks Despaxes....and damn you and your hyper super tension mix up :oops: :P

Update.... I added a dragon :mrgreen: ..I have decided the background will be an arena, where the torags person is preparing to fight the dragon..... This is just the starting on the dragon, It will be finished soon..

The elbow looks like its superextended...and yes thats a word. Like its going the wrong way AND his shoulder is too far away from his body ok, I see the superextended ness, and I know its a word :oops: ...and, Ill fix the shoulder...

mmm odd, because the arm isent bent :oops:

eh double post..jsut posting an update, messed around with anatomy now, much more realistic I'm thinking.. I am having problems making the armor look more like armor, but i textured a bit more anyway....I also fixed (our) left foot, it looked odd...I will probably start character 2 soon... yup.

eh, I kinda meant there to be 1 shoulder pad, I might add another, but I think it looks better without it... thanks for all the comments guys, this is really helping me.

Trying agian :x oh well, thanks alot for the help GS, it will let me get it down for the future. :)

Update, I fixed up anatomy, and added some texture to the armor, changed the arm, used alot of GS's advice to fix up anatomy, fixed boots... Added a few more colors... coming along nicly, might finish by the end of the week, doubtful though..

thanks GS, I will make those fixes, I wasent very happy with the whip at all, what do you mean by the shoulder pads covering the entire shoulder?

I too noticed that the torso seems a bit small in comparison to the legs, ill fix it with my next update...

Update, changed the anatomy and fixed the sheild. Added legs :mrgreen: , character 2 too come once character 1 is perfect...then background. Not sure what it is, I'm wrestling between two torags warriors standing like body gurads next to a person in the generic rich person stuff, with a pile of riches, but tha seems a bit cliche, or some sort of fighting scene.... anyways... C/C please? :)

looks nice, is this your take on the fadatar thats been plauging Pixelation?At first glace, the hair highlights seem a little odd, unless they are meant to be purple becausr thats how the hair was meant to look, Id make it, blueish or greyish. Nice job, and congratz on the tablet, I hear they are great fun, I doubt I'll ever be able to confirm this although :x

why not ask DH, since he uses it according to his tutorial (I home DH is a he, if not, I apologize DH, but i seem to remember you being one....yeah :oops: ) anyways, ask DH.

was thinking of him not holding it up like that since he isnt fighting anyone. yeah, I'm thinking I might either make him fighting, or more down to his side.

Nice job DH, I love the symbolism of this peice, i think the transitions of shades could be a bit smoother, but I like it none the less :)

:mrgreen: he knows my name! :P , thanks for the comments guys :)

well, in refernce to the guy holding the whip wrong, his hand is turned to the side. I like the contrast of the muscles, but I will take the sheild comment into account, seeing at it does look a little odd. Thanks for the comment :)