JAMjE Posted October 1, 2007 Share Posted October 1, 2007 OK this is the first ever sig I've made and i used a guide which is on here =] it looks a lot like the one in the tutorial but meh It's not finished yet but can you give me a bit of cc and well its my first so don't be too harsh :thumbsup: null and void Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sct_snake Posted October 1, 2007 Share Posted October 1, 2007 OK this is the first ever sig I've made and i used a guide which is on here =] it looks a lot like the one in the tutorial but meh It's not finished yet but can you give me a bit of cc and well its my first so don't be too harsh :thumbsup: Littlebit more detail and it will be great. But one thing... It has no head... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pomar1 Posted October 1, 2007 Share Posted October 1, 2007 It was in one of tutorials, ya? ----TheLair Game!----"Game isn't dead... You wish!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted October 1, 2007 Share Posted October 1, 2007 Tutorials are to show you how to do things, not almost copy them completely. Also this isn't a pixel, I do like the thing lines though. Flash? danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JAMjE Posted October 1, 2007 Author Share Posted October 1, 2007 OK this is the first ever sig I've made and i used a guide which is on here =] it looks a lot like the one in the tutorial but meh It's not finished yet but can you give me a bit of cc and well its my first so don't be too harsh :thumbsup: Littlebit more detail and it will be great. But one thing... It has no head... It was meant to be the back of the head hehe : null and void Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JAMjE Posted October 1, 2007 Author Share Posted October 1, 2007 It was in one of tutorials, ya? Dementedheroes tutorial... it's awesome :D null and void Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted October 1, 2007 Share Posted October 1, 2007 It's very simplistic.. I'm sure Demented's tutorial told you how to shade... Good things take time, it looks like you spent maybe a hour on this.. What's the big red blotch in the back of the 'head' supposed to be..? Regular- Three kittens out of ten. First- Seven kittens out of ten. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted October 1, 2007 Share Posted October 1, 2007 Tutorials are to show you how to do things, not almost copy them completely. Also this isn't a pixel, I do like the thing lines though. Flash? +1 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmyk Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 Increase that head size :P. Decrease the big flaps on the cape. Is the character supposed to be going bald o.O? Shading, shading, shading :-w Not a completed pixel so for a first WIP it's alright, nice background, simplistic but effective. :) Proud Retired Council of The GladiatiorzClick here for our website - 110+ F2P Combat Requirements Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DingoAte Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 make the party hat [bleep]es not so long, so you can see more the of the rectangle part of it. Also make it more 3d, like show the [bleep]es that would be at the front, aswell as the back. If this makes sence :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smapla Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 This is pathetic. You completely copied (very badly) demented hero's pixel signature. That's disgusting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DingoAte Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 This is pathetic. You completely copied (very badly) demented hero's pixel signature. That's disgusting. Someone a few months ago copied it too, but way more than this guy. I mean the dude had the tree, bridge and all! :shame: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 This is pathetic. You completely copied (very badly) demented hero's pixel signature. That's disgusting. Someone a few months ago copied it too, but way more than this guy. I mean the dude had the tree, bridge and all! :shame: I remember that, basically idea ripping. -.- On-Topic: Not good, not real pixel art, no shading, etc.. And, don't copy other people's ideas, it doesn't make you look good or anything. Well... good luck, at least you read a tutorial... :roll: pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainy_Day Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 Look in a mirror, and then attempt the face again. :P A lot more detail is needed, it's a rather rough sketh at the moment. :-w ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)RIP Michaelangelopolous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharockslayer Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 No originality, thats what modern day pixels lack :? . Thats no pixel, there is practically NO shading, the anatomy is quite lacking. Completely copied from a tutorial? Seriously, did you really think people would like this? And its your first, well like we care. It says it in the rules, it is discouraged to post your first work. I for one am quite sick of this forum filling up with first pixel works. And then they give us all kind of arguments because why we should be good on the rating. --C/C: Be original, that makes sure your pixel stands out from the rest. Learn anatomy. Shade. And atleast make the brick lines ect. straight. -- Goodluck. Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 Aside from the fact that it isn't a pixel, as you did it in flash, its horrid. The idea isn't even yours and you did his tutorial very badly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_Life Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 Locking this because of the flaming and the fact that you copied someone else his pixel. ~Kill Life "A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do"[Currently playing: K1ll L1f3] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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