Finally checked the homepage, first off the title on webpage looked like it just said "Tsyrealm". Also seems a bit odd that every chapter ends with...

 

Been a long day singing, should be good though. Damn we can sing well in a choir. And it sounds [bleep]ing good.

do you even constructive feedback

 

The book is an 'I'...

I see what he means, the I wasn't that easy to see

Audit your page bro

 

ty for the useless feedback

 

@Hedgehog, that's useless to me. That's like me saying "Your posting ability is 33." also don't refer to me as bro pls and ty

 

Does this make the "I" more prominent/noticable?

 

Edited February 14, 20197 yr by Veiva

I mean you wanted feedback and people are giving it to you, complaining about it isn't going to encourage people. Things I noticed:

 

Even when you pointed out the book was supposed to be an I I still had a hard time seeing it.

 

Also combination of the slideshow and arrow buttons for the pictures felt a little weird to me. I wasn't sure that the arrows did anything the first couple times I used them because the pictures were scrolling at the same rate. Maybe just pick one or the other?

 

Also the arrow buttons aren't aligned in Chrome which was a little jarring - I see you have a margin on one but not the other, maybe it'd look better with a bottom margin on the left arrow?

 

I think the font / character images are nice but the layout kinda reminds me of a 90s geocity site lol. It's fine but doesn't look super modern, probably because you don't use the full width of the page like most more modern pages do. Look at some examples for some more modern games like the sites for Stardew Valley and Wargroove - see how these sites use the full width and break up into sections? I think that would help your site look more professional. You could maybe have your background on top, transition into the ItsyRealm logo over it, go into a slideshow, then give your blurb and github link at the bottom.

 

edit: posted this before the second logo but I still have a hard time reading the I tbh

i would incorproate the book logo idea somewehre else in thet itle and just have a normal upperacse i instead for legiibility

I mean you wanted feedback and people are giving it to you, complaining about it isn't going to encourage people. Things I noticed:

 

Even when you pointed out the book was supposed to be an I I still had a hard time seeing it.

 

Also combination of the slideshow and arrow buttons for the pictures felt a little weird to me. I wasn't sure that the arrows did anything the first couple times I used them because the pictures were scrolling at the same rate. Maybe just pick one or the other?

 

Also the arrow buttons aren't aligned in Chrome which was a little jarring - I see you have a margin on one but not the other, maybe it'd look better with a bottom margin on the left arrow?

 

I think the font / character images are nice but the layout kinda reminds me of a 90s geocity site lol. It's fine but doesn't look super modern, probably because you don't use the full width of the page like most more modern pages do. Look at some examples for some more modern games like the sites for Stardew Valley and Wargroove - see how these sites use the full width and break up into sections? I think that would help your site look more professional. You could maybe have your background on top, transition into the ItsyRealm logo over it, go into a slideshow, then give your blurb and github link at the bottom.

 

edit: posted this before the second logo but I still have a hard time reading the I tbh

Literally you're the only one who has given good feedback.

 

Think back to English class and tell me any of this feedback (sans yours) is good

 

Also this kind of feedback would've been helpful when I posted a mock up ... a few weeks ago (this is not directed at you)

 

I like Wargroove's site but Stardew Valley's sucks, really.

i would incorproate the book logo idea somewehre else in thet itle and just have a normal upperacse i instead for legiibility

I think there's merit to this, typos not withstanding. I'd like to at least see what it would look like if the book icon was more centered as a background piece (much like the sword in runescape) and had a letter character for the "I"

 

?

 

edit: I made the website more responsive, please take a look and let me know if it's an improvement (@Kalphite and @Hedgehog mostly).

Edited February 14, 20197 yr by Veiva

that looks better

Go to the audits tab in the dev tools and run an audit, on mobile and desktop, and it'll give you a list of everything you need to fix

Go to the audits tab in the dev tools and run an audit, on mobile and desktop, and it'll give you a list of everything you need to fix

Besides a few warnings I don't care about, all the mobile warnings are for a "mobile Chrome app" which my site is not.

(has only checked the site on mobile)

 

Today, finally sorted out my grandma's inheritance. Got everyone together, which I thought would be pretty much impossible. No holdups. Even my drunkard uncle managed to get sober.

I'm not gonna say you have to fix anything, but when Google gives you a laundry list of things to improve, you might want to consider it

 

Go to the audits tab in the dev tools and run an audit, on mobile and desktop, and it'll give you a list of everything you need to fix

Besides a few warnings I don't care about, all the mobile warnings are for a "mobile Chrome app" which my site is not.

Think it means for users viewing the site from Chrome app, when looking at it on my phone I can't see the slideshow image at the top, which isn't a big deal.

I disabled the slideshow on mobile.

 

Hedgehog, those warnings are for "progressive web apps." My site isn't a progressive web app. Why would I fix them? Progressive web apps are sites that can run "offline" and pinned like an app on Android and ChromeOS.

 

I fixed almost all the warnings that were relevant. My site is now mobile friendly. Google's webmaster tools agree so ...

 

So turn off the PWA audit then

Ok the point was I fixed most of the warnings and will fix a few more when I get around to it; the bulk of those really bad warnings (PWA) aren't relevant to my website. Look I'm trying to say I listened to your feedback.

 

Estonian Dude gave me some feedback so I added a few things:

 

 

 

(Tool tips in inventory-based UIs like shop windows and the inventory tab + level up notifications).

I like the level up notification! The item tip box is getting a little crowded though. Maybe have a toggle switch for like "advanced info" and "basic info" for item boxes?

Yeah, the available actions seems unnecessary when you get them anyway right-clicking.

Honestly just show the item name, then put the actions and description (examine) under a right click menu

I've had three different opinions on how to handle the tool tip lol.

 

Someone likes the actions, two people don't want the actions but keep the rest, and one person wants just the item. Wee.

 

I'll make an executive decision and here we go:

 

 

Shows "[Verb] Item Name / Description". [Verb] is the default left-click action, or nothing if there's none. I'll add a toggle for "light" tool tips that will hide the examine... eventually...

I went to a new dentist today and apparently I have four cavities that need to be filled. I've never had any. So how was everyone else's Valentine's Day?

1 AM was when I landed at the girl's place and started doing something, when I started at 7 AM. We have the saying here, that he who does, can do lots.