axeraider70 Posted September 1, 2008 Share Posted September 1, 2008 Let me know what you think. Don't give me any "go study an anatomy book" crap. I hate that. Just tell me what sucks :) axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 1, 2008 Share Posted September 1, 2008 Haven't seenyou in a while, I like the piece, but the shadows on his face are a bit overdone imo. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted September 1, 2008 Author Share Posted September 1, 2008 Hmm yeah i see what you mean. should've cut back more towards the left cheek. Thanks. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknowz Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 Work on your proportions, head is way too small and the arms are too short. I like the shading though. Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 Work on your proportions, head is way too small and the arms are too short. I like the shading though. It would probably be a lot easier to just make his torso bigger. Also, his neck is pretty long. Pretty cool though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted September 2, 2008 Author Share Posted September 2, 2008 Work on your proportions, head is way too small and the arms are too short. I like the shading though. hey unknowz, hows it goin. I remember that sig haha. But yeah i looked at this and you're right, the proportions are off. Work on your proportions, head is way too small and the arms are too short. I like the shading though. It would probably be a lot easier to just make his torso bigger. Also, his neck is pretty long. Pretty cool though. Well you're right about the neck, but the torso definately does not need to be bigger. #-o. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh181830 Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 That's not a machine gun ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknowz Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 Work on your proportions, head is way too small and the arms are too short. I like the shading though. It would probably be a lot easier to just make his torso bigger. Also, his neck is pretty long. Pretty cool though. Erm I think you mean smaller, because making his torso bigger would just make the problem worse :? The neck does seem a bit too long though, but that may be because his head is too small. =-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- Hey axe, I'm fine. Your name rings a bell, did you participate in one of the old collabs? Like the one with the waterfall and orange sky. E: this one Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 Looks pretty good, nice style. One little thing though, there is a red-ish glow on his body, but not on his face and hair, which seems a bit strange. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsavi Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 I like it, but there are some problems with the proportions, all of them mentioned earlier. But about the anatomy... Just kidding. It's great, don't worry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted September 2, 2008 Author Share Posted September 2, 2008 That's not a machine gun ;) Ahhh so it's an M16 gimme a break. Assault Rifle, w/e. -.- Hey axe, I'm fine. Your name rings a bell, did you participate in one of the old collabs? Like the one with the waterfall and orange sky. E: this one No, but i remember the people you mention in your sig did. I pretty much gave up pixeling after the reinforcement of Rule-Whatever over at Jagex. Looks pretty good, nice style. One little thing though, there is a red-ish glow on his body, but not on his face and hair, which seems a bit strange. Well i did have it on his face and hair but i didnt like it. lol. I like it, but there are some problems with the proportions, all of them mentioned earlier. But about the anatomy... Just kidding. It's great, don't worry. Lol. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 Haha, it's Axeraider! :lol: I thought you said that you would never visit Tip.it :D But on-topic, I love this piece as I love all of your other work too. You should post up some of your brushes. Neck is bit wierd, but that's all bad things I got to say. Great job once again. [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 The anatomy is all off. :lol: nah, jk. Looks pretty good tbh, post your brushes pl0x? 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 That's not a machine gun ;) Ahhh so it's an M16 gimme a break. Assault Rifle, w/e. -.- He's holding it wrong,then.The side facing us should have that saftey catch thing (where you can put it to SAFE,SEMI or AUTO).On low alert (like he is) I hold the barrel lower,so that it doesn't point at the person-next-to-you's groin... so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 http://www.bakaneko.com/howto/figure/an ... index.html Yeah yeah anatomy, but that's the only real problem I have with this. Plus his head is twisted weird. Even if you want to do a cartoony style it's still better to know some basic anatomy. :P Oh and, eh, hi axe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted September 2, 2008 Author Share Posted September 2, 2008 http://www.bakaneko.com/howto/figure/anatomy2/index.html [ Image ] Yeah yeah anatomy, but that's the only real problem I have with this. Plus his head is twisted weird. Even if you want to do a cartoony style it's still better to know some basic anatomy. :P Oh and, eh, hi axe. lol, I appreciate the reference image, i really do haha. I mean i just hate the people who used to say "You should really go study an anatomy book" and then walk away. So annoying. Hiya, Nad. :P ------- Haha, it's Axeraider! :lol: I thought you said that you would never visit Tip.it :D But on-topic, I love this piece as I love all of your other work too. You should post up some of your brushes. Neck is bit wierd, but that's all bad things I got to say. Great job once again. Hiya runemesta, so they made you a mod here too? lol. Well i said that because i was busy making my foundations on deviantART :P But i do like Tip.It because people are usually more honest and experianced than on dA in terms of criticism. I mean, if you noticed, people usually just don't look at it if they don't like it. Very few people stop by and make critics of themselves. That's not a machine gun ;) Ahhh so it's an M16 gimme a break. Assault Rifle, w/e. -.- He's holding it wrong,then.The side facing us should have that saftey catch thing (where you can put it to SAFE,SEMI or AUTO).On low alert (like he is) I hold the barrel lower,so that it doesn't point at the person-next-to-you's groin... You mean like this? axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speedofsound Posted September 4, 2008 Share Posted September 4, 2008 Hey Axe, long time no see. As others have said the shading on the face is a bit weird, and his neck is pretty long. Other than that I like it, good job. You can't ever find a place that's nice and peaceful, because there isn't any. You may think there is, but once you get there, when you're not looking, somebody'll sneak up and write "(bleep) you" right under your nose. Try it sometime. I think, even, if I ever die, and they stick me in a cemetery, and I have a tombstone and all, it'll say "Holden Caulfield" on it, and then what year I was born and what year I died, and then right under that it'll say "(bleep) you." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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