Let me know what you think. Don't give me any "go study an anatomy book" crap. I hate that. Just tell me what sucks :)

 

 

 

Haven't seenyou in a while, I like the piece, but the shadows on his face are a bit overdone imo.

Hmm yeah i see what you mean. should've cut back more towards the left cheek. Thanks.

Work on your proportions, head is way too small and the arms are too short.

 

I like the shading though.

Work on your proportions, head is way too small and the arms are too short.

 

I like the shading though.

 

 

 

It would probably be a lot easier to just make his torso bigger. Also, his neck is pretty long.

 

 

 

Pretty cool though.

Work on your proportions, head is way too small and the arms are too short.

 

I like the shading though.

 

 

 

hey unknowz, hows it goin. I remember that sig haha. But yeah i looked at this and you're right, the proportions are off.

 

 

 

Work on your proportions, head is way too small and the arms are too short.

 

I like the shading though.

 

 

 

It would probably be a lot easier to just make his torso bigger. Also, his neck is pretty long.

 

 

 

Pretty cool though.

 

 

 

Well you're right about the neck, but the torso definately does not need to be bigger. #-o.

That's not a machine gun ;)

Work on your proportions, head is way too small and the arms are too short.

 

I like the shading though.

 

 

 

It would probably be a lot easier to just make his torso bigger. Also, his neck is pretty long.

 

 

 

Pretty cool though.

 

 

 

Erm I think you mean smaller, because making his torso bigger would just make the problem worse :?

 

The neck does seem a bit too long though, but that may be because his head is too small.

 

 

 

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Hey axe, I'm fine. Your name rings a bell, did you participate in one of the old collabs? Like the one with the waterfall and orange sky.

 

 

 

E: this one

 

Looks pretty good, nice style. One little thing though, there is a red-ish glow on his body, but not on his face and hair, which seems a bit strange.

I like it, but there are some problems with the proportions, all of them mentioned earlier.

 

But about the anatomy...

 

 

 

 

 

Just kidding. It's great, don't worry.

That's not a machine gun ;)

 

 

 

Ahhh so it's an M16 gimme a break. Assault Rifle, w/e. -.-

 

 

 

 

Hey axe, I'm fine. Your name rings a bell, did you participate in one of the old collabs? Like the one with the waterfall and orange sky.

 

 

 

E: this one

 

 

 

 

No, but i remember the people you mention in your sig did. I pretty much gave up pixeling after the reinforcement of Rule-Whatever over at Jagex.

 

 

 

Looks pretty good, nice style. One little thing though, there is a red-ish glow on his body, but not on his face and hair, which seems a bit strange.

 

 

 

Well i did have it on his face and hair but i didnt like it. lol.

 

 

 

I like it, but there are some problems with the proportions, all of them mentioned earlier.

 

But about the anatomy...

 

 

 

Just kidding. It's great, don't worry.

 

 

 

 

Lol.

Haha, it's Axeraider! :lol: I thought you said that you would never visit Tip.it :D

 

 

 

But on-topic, I love this piece as I love all of your other work too. You should post up some of your brushes.

 

 

 

Neck is bit wierd, but that's all bad things I got to say. Great job once again.

The anatomy is all off.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nah, jk. Looks pretty good tbh, post your brushes pl0x?

That's not a machine gun ;)

 

 

 

Ahhh so it's an M16 gimme a break. Assault Rifle, w/e. -.-

 

 

 

He's holding it wrong,then.The side facing us should have that saftey catch thing (where you can put it to SAFE,SEMI or AUTO).On low alert (like he is) I hold the barrel lower,so that it doesn't point at the person-next-to-you's groin...

http://www.bakaneko.com/howto/figure/an ... index.html

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah yeah anatomy, but that's the only real problem I have with this. Plus his head is twisted weird. Even if you want to do a cartoony style it's still better to know some basic anatomy. :P

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and, eh, hi axe.

http://www.bakaneko.com/howto/figure/anatomy2/index.html

 

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Yeah yeah anatomy, but that's the only real problem I have with this. Plus his head is twisted weird. Even if you want to do a cartoony style it's still better to know some basic anatomy. :P

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and, eh, hi axe.

 

 

 

lol, I appreciate the reference image, i really do haha. I mean i just hate the people who used to say "You should really go study an anatomy book" and then walk away. So annoying.

 

 

 

Hiya, Nad. :P

 

 

 

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Haha, it's Axeraider! :lol: I thought you said that you would never visit Tip.it :D

 

 

 

But on-topic, I love this piece as I love all of your other work too. You should post up some of your brushes.

 

 

 

Neck is bit wierd, but that's all bad things I got to say. Great job once again.

 

 

 

Hiya runemesta, so they made you a mod here too? lol. Well i said that because i was busy making my foundations on deviantART :P

 

 

 

But i do like Tip.It because people are usually more honest and experianced than on dA in terms of criticism. I mean, if you noticed, people usually just don't look at it if they don't like it. Very few people stop by and make critics of themselves.

 

 

 

That's not a machine gun ;)

 

 

 

Ahhh so it's an M16 gimme a break. Assault Rifle, w/e. -.-

 

 

 

He's holding it wrong,then.The side facing us should have that saftey catch thing (where you can put it to SAFE,SEMI or AUTO).On low alert (like he is) I hold the barrel lower,so that it doesn't point at the person-next-to-you's groin...

 

 

 

You mean like this?

Hey Axe, long time no see.

 

 

 

As others have said the shading on the face is a bit weird, and his neck is pretty long.

 

Other than that I like it, good job.