FuturamaGuy Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 Cool Story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goobalistic Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 Cool story, but what the heck was that about?! :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diverboy699 Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 yeah i liked it.. also had a good lesson to be learned... which many ppl in rs have forgotton 91 RC!!! #332 to get it! "D'you wear a black armbandWhen they shot the manWho said 'Peace could last forever'" Guns N' Roses Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foodfight13 Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 I thought it would have been a better ending if the guy had been pked and then killed and found himself back at lumbridge and then the story went on and he somehow got a happy ending. -Runescape Addict --- Seven-time Writer for the Tip.It Times-"Yes I have tricks in my pocket, I have things up my sleeve. But I am the opposite of a stage magician. He gives you the illusion that has the appearance of truth. I give you truth in the pleasant disguise of illusion." - The Glass Menagerie"This game isn't about graphics, it's about fun." - The Great Ortiz 9471<> Dragon drops: Plateskirt(1), Half Shield(1) <> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evanboy70 Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 Not exactly how I recall noobiehood. If I remember correctly, I stayed in lumby by the church colloecting the bones of countless men and women. I got over 15 prayer off of that, getting me well on my way to becoming the monk tank I am now. When I finally decided to venture off, I headed aimlessly, finally finding myself in the land of goblins, by the Port Sarim Jail. I collected more gold than I could imagine, 30 gp (perfect for the boat ride) and more runes than I could ever use (probably about ten of each elelmental) Then, a kindly fellow by the name of maddog714 offered me something nice, he offered to give me a sword, far better than the dagger I was using. I followed him happily, and he led me to the bank. I had no idea what a bank was, and didn't realize that he wasn't taking me anywhere near a bank at all. I didn't worry about the darkening screen, as the wilderness loomed over me. My new friend would protect me from whatever harm may come across me. Then, my new friend began attacking me. Not even knowing how to run, I tried vainly to walk away. Without descending even three levels of wilderness, I fell, losing everything I had worked so hard for. Angry and disssoriented, I resumed collecting bones, pushing my prayer to 20. So, in truth, I owe a lot to that maddog fellow. He evil ways helped me alot. My only regret is that I can't challenge him to another fight, because by now, I would crush him underfoot.       If anyone has recently seen or spoken to maddog714, let him know I want to talk to him. People just need to learn to share crabs.I'd prefer my nether regions clear of diseases, thank you very much.just turn off accept aids Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SenorTamale Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 what i find funny is that practically all the people posting (cept runesmithie) about starting way early in RSC all have 1-4 post count :roll:       but nice romantic story. i kind of got the impression that it was kind of hurried, alot of minor spelling and grammar mistakes.. especially "Do unto others, as you would [have them] do unto you," and the incorrect use of hither in alot of places. not really a major issue though, point got across.       for all the people that are saying "it only takes me 2 min to walk from lumby to fally" need to realize that in games like runescape, RL time really doesn't pertain to game time; obviously walking through two towns and miles of countryside (proportionate to the size of the RS map) is going to take a few days IRL. just like how farming potatoes only takes a half hour max in the game, whereas it takes months IRL.       also, what/who should we do/talk to if we want to submit something ourselves, short story or otherwise? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lionheart_0 Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 I did like the story, but... i dont think the tip.it times should be used for story telling... but thats just me, and i aint the editor. Sig by IkuraiYour Guide to Posting! Behave or I will send my Moose mounted Beaver launchers at you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bludragn0 Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 :wall: lol!   that was a very well written story, u should be a writer       btw the player that gave the ammy of glory to ya: it was me! and i want my gift repayed! lol jk, that player must've been nice       if that whole thing was made up and im making myself look like an idiot...tell me before i do something stupider!   :wall::wall::wall::wall: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melikerunescape Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 like the story dude. Â Â Â Ya I remember when i first played runescape. Lol, i didn't know u could talk to the other players so when i got off of tutorial island and pple were talking to each other i was surprised. I got alot of help from more experienced players so now I sometimes go out of my way to help new players. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sake_Samurai Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 i wrote a story that touches on the tutorial island experince, its called '"Why do you torment me so?!"' im really excited about feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
purescimmy Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 great story, i wish i was lvl 3 with glory =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speedy_petey Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 this is the best one i ever read! :)Â Â Â Â Â Â Â ~Sith: Emoticons removed. Excessive use of smilies is considered spam! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leesters Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 thanks for publishing this is one of my better pieces, thank you tip.it and thank you for whoever posted it       Very nice! My favorite part was the engraving. Golden rule is my religion man, and runescape needs a big dose of it to go around. I liked how you turned the walk to Fally in real life time. Overnight hike and camping out overnight... lol.        I really enjoyed that, thank you. Wish there was more of this on here. A circus in Runescape?? Oh my. REMEMBER RUNESCAPE KARMA! Be a nice player, and nice things will come back to you.I'm back, add me if you deleted me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omario_101 Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaos Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 i loved the story :D Â Â Â Â Â Â Â woot finaly lvl 60 mining 58 smithing woot 8) Â Â Â and im broke :idea: im gonna beg lol! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hymn Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 this is the first artivale that i actually enjoyed reading. amazing job dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eugeneru Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 nice structured plot. it sadly reminded me of my noobie first year in runescape classic, where i telegrabbed all the stuff on drop parties before i decided to become a pker...       good written story, i enjoyed reading it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest skype7 Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 holy vampire cow flying in the air while eating a chicken!!!!       That was the best story i have ever read :shock: :shock:        That was really good.More!!! More           MAn im thinking that was the tip it drop party(too bad i couldn't come :( )           Plz right more but congratulations be a writer!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whyareall Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 i remember how every time I died someone would always give me an axe and tinderbox, and now I do that to other players, to thank the first few. if that happened to you, pass it on, and make someone a bit happier!       p.s i didnt even no what a drop party was! LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowguy2010 Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 nice story....ahhh the n00b times...couldnt get any better...lol my friend didnt do as well though...he attked a unicorn when he was lvl 3 and he got killed...said it was a horse with a d*ck on its head...he hasnt played since...grins... :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertvan1 Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 If only everyone was as nice as that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shade463 Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 awsome story!!!!!Too bad runescape wasnt like that....lol. That story kinda reminded me of the yip.it drop, lol, there was mages doing telnitic grab, alot of people there(high levels) and i rember seeing a guy in bunny ears, lol. Nice story and hope you do more.. Dreaming of a blue phat everyday....=p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_drunk_dude Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 god, it was soooo boring. long, boring, but had a point, so u got 1/3 right which is also my rating for it. the story itself was all right... but it was too long and full of details with the sole purpose of extending the story           watch the flames come and come Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monosomekid Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 i remember when we got to choose the class we want then get some lvls and items according to the class a great old time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taggerung000 Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 i enjoyed the story, i really liked how you were i think the word is explanatory...(you explained what it was like around you....) and how you made it like a book would do it by sleeping, making it take a few days instead of just for example.... i walked with him to fallador.... or something like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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