Tip.It Times: New beginnings in a new land

[Eeeeediot 0]

This week's Tip.It Times has been released. Feel free to discuss the piece of fiction or post any comments. If you have any criticism, please make sure its constructive :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

New beginnings in a new land

 

 

 

Articrunite

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here I am. A freshly made character just getting off the rowboat from Tutorial Island. The damn sailor didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t know how to sail us back to Asgarnia, and now IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m stranded here in Misthalin with nothing but a Bronze Dagger and a Wooden Shield. The runes given to me by the wizard were just used for k...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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[spling 0]

I love the story Rba. :D Great job!

[Craven_Image 0]

Nicely wrote story :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I remember first joining and being greeted by someone calling me a noob because I didn't know how to move. Got most my money in the earlier days by mining and smithing bronze daggers and selling them to the sword shop in Varrock :oops:

[Arcticrunite 0]

you spelled my name wrong :( tis arCtic

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

fix it please? :P and thanks for publishing this is one of my better pieces, thank you tip.it and thank you for whoever posted it

[Eeeeediot 0]

Fixx0red :P And you're welcome.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nicely written story harping back to days of yonder :)

[Arcticrunite 0]

i tried my best :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

if you dont like my story, shame on you for not having any sense

 

 

 

if you love my story, thanks and i appreciate it :)

[weasel10 0]

Wow...Awesome story! Do more! do more!!!

[Bubsa 0]

Nice story, Rba :P It's got me ready for bed time :D

[2shae 0]

sniff* sniff* crying* it was soooo BEAUTIFUL!! :cry: :o

[Adam007 1]

Nicely done. :)

 

 

 

Was that an Oergg reference stuck in there with the bunny hat and pink robes? :P

[Arcticrunite 0]

Nicely done. :)

 

 

 

Was that an Oergg reference stuck in there with the bunny hat and pink robes? :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:wink: :oops:

[puzzlemaster1129 0]

it makes me cry (and laugh about the mage!)

[someone_els 0]

That's incredible. I never really thought much about that phrase, until reading this.

[Darkphive 0]

nice job man!

 

 

 

itll be great to make a continuation of this dude, maybe follow along with a storyline of a quest? [knihgts sword would be awesome my fav nooby quest!]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

keep it up xD

[Marco 0]

Man, I still wet myself when I see Rick Turpentine.

[Traxion 0]

sweet, story. I loved the turpentine part. the descriptions were amazing and i hope to read more like that

[Nathaninch 0]

Fantastic, buddy. :)

[Hunter360x 0]

nice story

[rj815 0]

Yes, quite an interesting read. Great story! You got quite lucky.

[Vape 0]

Very good story :!: (Except I don't know how many new players would have p2p (he gave him a p2p amulet at the end.))

[togers 0]

very well written story after reading lots of fantasy novels you seem like a writer who could write a very nice piece i hope to read more of your pieces in the future

[Trojann2 4]

Awesomely Wrote Man...very Good Work.

[Hobgoblin11 0]

typo - Telekenetic=Telekinetic

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Loved the story, that, ladies and gentlemen is how to write 'The Diary of a Noob'!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Really nice writing dude, would love to hear a sequel.

[Triplets_KGB 0]

Man, I still wet myself when I see Rick Turpentine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rofl.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its a pretty well written story :) I enjoyed every bit of it!

[The_Virus 0]

that was a good story. i could actually picture myself in that position, it was told so well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i remember my first time too. had no clue where to go or what to do. so i jsut wandered around and before i even reached the cowfarm in lumbridge i met a lvl 7. his name was mike. and he showed me that way to varrok. and we've been friends ever since. its been almost two years and i still talk to him.