Just want to show yall my latest pixel

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

C/C and Comments are always welcome :ohnoes:

I'm not sure what it is, it might be the black outlines, but the characters just look out of place for some reason... other than that its really good

black lines arent used to advantage, so you should be-rid of them, also do some work on the anatomy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not bad.

thanks all,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And na, Im not ever gonna remove my black lines, used it for over 3 years soon and still think it looks bette than coloured lines, wont happend, sry

thanks all,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And na, Im not ever gonna remove my black lines, used it for over 3 years soon and still think it looks bette than coloured lines, wont happend, sry

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

heh, well but I must say, I am a fan of your shading on the skin, and the grass... (now look at my newest pixel and C+Cit)

I'm not sure what it is, it might be the black outlines, but the characters just look out of place for some reason... other than that its really good

its not teh black outlines on the people, its the inconsistancy of the outline color. he has black outlines on the people, and look at everything else? colored lines. thats why they look out of place. ive nagged him for a while about it too, but he wont quit. its like smoking. hes smoking black outlines. sorry for going off topic.

Excellent, anatomy needs work, and a few color choices need to be made for consistency.

 

 

 

However the glass is excellent!

the girl is really fat at the top of her chainmail like she's shrugging. If thats so its fine but if not change it

10/10 for this grass and all. I love this sig.

 

 

 

Ur grass is cool. Skill cape too. Windows, and this... lady(meaby she is a little too fat) :D

 

 

 

Very nice bircks!

i love this one great work and good to see u back :wink:

Nice work. =D>

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, could we see it with coloured lines, just to see if black lines do look any better? :-s

Firstly, Welcome back once again m0ther :

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

secondly, I disagree sadly haha, black lines can work well to a certain degree, I wouldn't try convice anyone that coloured lines are a necessity in pixel art cus it just isn't, it doesn't matter how you go about doing anything if that in the end your results are exactly what you intented, I would just add that your lines maybe do look a bit too intruding on your piece, the solution could be to simply change the colour of your linework if you wish, but if you wish to keep your black you could just break through the linework.. This isn't colour by numbers so keeping within the lines isn't essential, in fact it can smoothen up your work and make some details easier to see...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here's a quick example of how I mean, only a slight difference but it does reduce the boldness of the lines..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its similar to AAing but not as complicated, just colour a pixel or two into your linework..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But yes don't feel obliged to do this if you don't want to, my advice would be to try out what people tell you, see if it helps at all.. At the end of the day you're your own person, but please take it into consideration.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My opinions are that you're actually a pretty good pixel artist Y0ur_m0ther, your perspective looks good, characters look nice and your colouring/shading works well, any other advice would be to up the contrast in certain places, like the white areas, add some light blues for shading.. The grass is great but comparing to the characters they kinda look seperated, maybe add some grass stems around her feet? other than that its great, your doin well :thumbsup: ..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and fancy borders always look nice :) Finishes of your signatures well.

you seem to have an interesting Idea of female anatomy, everything except the head is very stocky, which seems to be the norm in your signetures with females, female anatomy is smooth and flowing, the anatomy of a female is different from a males. Lookie at this, it is a very nice break down of female anatomy, and someone slap me if this whole thing is uncalled for because I am wrong and he is right :oops: anyways,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A human anatomy guide

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

another guide to anatomy

:x

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nice but..... :cry: :-#

you seem to have an interesting Idea of female anatomy, everything except the head is very stocky, which seems to be the norm in your signetures with females, female anatomy is smooth and flowing, the anatomy of a female is different from a males. Lookie at this, it is a very nice break down of female anatomy, and someone slap me if this whole thing is uncalled for because I am wrong and he is right :oops: anyways,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A human anatomy guide

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

another guide to anatomy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nope, im with you on this one. his girls always look really bulky. possibly a result of his linework tho, not his anatomy. dont misinterperate this, but your lines kinda "jerk around" a bit, again, could be just me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*slaps reddrawn because his name is reddrawn*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*slaps reddrawn because his name is reddrawn*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

#-o ..Reddawn :mrgreen:

Nice, the place at the sig is edgevill, right?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

maybe you could work on the grass a bit more, some parts

 

 

 

dont look like real grass :wink:

Yeha it's in edgeville just outside the bank,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THanks alot for all the tips and c/c, I guess i'll do 2 versions off the next sig, a rsc one with black outlines and a tip.it one with coloured ones :twisted: .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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