Echofish Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Here I am again, I had a sudden urge to draw in paint and this is what I got: My version is soo much better, don't you think? :thumbsup: First update of 2007! I got rid of the scimmy for the moment. i'll try to focus on the clothes this time. Added 'dithering' to it (Heh, i don't even know what it means :-# ) Luv the comments. Still working on it, gonna see what more I can do Anyone suggest a background? I don't want to leave it plain. Ultra Unholy,Hearted Machine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Looks pretty good, but the sword could be much smaller. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 omg new pixeler in town pl0x? wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharockslayer Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 I love the dragonhide vambs! and the sword could be smaller.. infact much smaller. Or take a Rune 2 handed. Wich is pretty cool too Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echofish Posted December 10, 2006 Author Share Posted December 10, 2006 I love the dragonhide vambs! and the sword could be smaller.. infact much smaller. Or take a Rune 2 handed. Wich is pretty cool too I'll try to fix that, I find it hard to do draw it out coz I don't know what the shape would be in that angle Ultra Unholy,Hearted Machine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 I love that pose [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fortress2000 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 :thumbsup: Nice. Welcome, grasshopper.... :P Writing in colour was fun while it lasted...The Tip.It. Furry! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 welcome to the gallery echofish this is pretty sweet so far, I would just put more contrast in your shading though as some shades are hard to see and it doesn't give your character much depth.. Very nice style and pose, nothing to say about your anatomy.. I'll just try help it you have any problems through this. Goodluck with the face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dude_of_war4 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 looks hawt :XD: is it finished? i hope not click my sig for my blog!!!Thanks everyone for the sigs they pwn!No. Why should i give presents for someone in rs?Most selfish thing I've ever heard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiriyama Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Ammy needs to look more circular. But nice work anyway. Denizen of Darkness| PSN= sworddude198 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hugger_88 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 :thumbsup: Nice. Welcome, grasshopper.... :P You didnt type in red!!!!! It looks VERY good, as said before, the sword could be smaller. Here mouth and head can be anatomized aittle more... Looks very good though! =D> - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star. Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Wow the pose is really good and the shading too. Ya overall good but the weapon way big. ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fortress2000 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 :thumbsup: Nice. Welcome, grasshopper.... :P You didnt type in red!!!!! I know.... mods say no... :cry: I hope I may be able to again, one day though, which is a good thing I suppose. :thumbsup: Writing in colour was fun while it lasted...The Tip.It. Furry! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 oh deary, you can't be the one in red anymore, fortress. back OT, it's always nice to get a new fresh view on pixeling. IMO that's a good mouth. She looks very nice at this point, just fix the lines. I can't wait to see the finished product. [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echofish Posted December 10, 2006 Author Share Posted December 10, 2006 I have no idea on how to do the sword >.< Thanks for the comments guys! Ultra Unholy,Hearted Machine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleteddeleted Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 :thumbsup: Nice. Welcome, grasshopper.... :P You didnt type in red!!!!! I know.... mods say no... :cry: I hope I may be able to again, one day though, which is a good thing I suppose. :thumbsup: thats so unfair.... anyway that drawings really gd cant wait for final pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 If the admins cared if you wrote in colour, then why did they add that attribute to the forums? One word for that. LAME thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjb21 Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 One word for that. LAME yeyas for uber red! it does look verry nice =) some pointers tho =) clean up the linework atm yours looks like: o o oo o o should be more like: o o o o o it looks far better than way. another thing is her hair at the back, it seams like its bending up towards the centerline of her skull, have it going no more that horizantal there. pose it goos, skimmy looks good, could do wth a hilt mind... make the ammy more circular, atm its rectangular. anatomy is very good, as are those vambs looks very nice =) PJB21 100% my own work, i make my own brushes: set 1 set 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wisp Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 very nice, though a few things. i think the neck is just a tad too long. Also i think the shading on the shirt is a bit off, it looks to me almost like the way the light reflects its.. like porcelain or something. that's just my opinion though. Very nice! Hegemony-Spain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 Nice pixel work, different than most styles, I guess because it's a bigger pic. About the full posts in color, it was not allowed anymore because some users abused it severely, don't spam this topic with off topic discussion please. Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fortress2000 Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 Fair enough.... (grr... :x ) Anyway, time for some on-topic things now. The neck look a little long to me. Maybe bring it down a little? Just looks like it doesn't fit a human. Also, how about [bleep]y vambraces? You know, if you get the spines from the kebbits from hunting, then add them to normal vambraces, with a chisel I think, you get [bleep]y vambs. Much cooler. :thumbsup: Writing in colour was fun while it lasted...The Tip.It. Furry! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echofish Posted December 11, 2006 Author Share Posted December 11, 2006 Fair enough.... (grr... :x ) Anyway, time for some on-topic things now. The neck look a little long to me. Maybe bring it down a little? Just looks like it doesn't fit a human. Also, how about [bleep]y vambraces? You know, if you get the spines from the kebbits from hunting, then add them to normal vambraces, with a chisel I think, you get [bleep]y vambs. Much cooler. :thumbsup: I'll try that, although I don't what it would looks like coz I'm not a member Ultra Unholy,Hearted Machine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fortress2000 Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 Ah, I see. Writing in colour was fun while it lasted...The Tip.It. Furry! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megakiller32 Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 omg new pixeler in town pl0x? definitly, when i read the title, i thought you just copied your character and went into paint and outlined it, but its great :D# there could be a bit more shading though, otherwise, its fantastic. Good job :D Quit Runescape 30th May 2006.Thanks to Hawkxs for my signature :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 ok my crits would be this.. About her proportions I would say that her head is slightly too high, and her neck is too straight, usually necks curve out to the neck.. Look at her ear position, its way too low.. Her right eye needs to move a few pixels right, imagine if she was looking straight on, her right eye would be too far over imo.. Your linework could be made to look so much more smoother if you just took care where you place your pixels.. As for your palette you really need more contrast to add depth to your image, with your skin tones add more warmth to your darker shades by moving your colour selector slightly towards the red.. But I really love the posture and general design of this so far, I couldn't help making an edit :wall: its so hard to simply explain anything without showing someone what ya mean. Make sure you've got a lightsource, it looks as if the lights coming from the left because of the highlights but the darker shades dont suggest the same.. Hope my edit shows how you could possible improve your character's face and general shading.. Didn't want to simply finish it off for you because all I really wanted to do is illustrate what I mean about contrast.. The additional smoothness is just added AA and dithering which I personally wouldn't be worried about, your doing great so far.. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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