Here I am again, I had a sudden urge to draw in paint and this is what I got:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My version is soo much better, don't you think? :thumbsup:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

First update of 2007! I got rid of the scimmy for the moment. i'll try to focus on the clothes this time. Added 'dithering' to it (Heh, i don't even know what it means :-# )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Luv the comments. Still working on it, gonna see what more I can do

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyone suggest a background? I don't want to leave it plain.

Looks pretty good, but the sword could be much smaller.

omg new pixeler in town pl0x?

I love the dragonhide vambs! and the sword could be smaller.. infact much smaller.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Or take a Rune 2 handed. Wich is pretty cool too

I love the dragonhide vambs! and the sword could be smaller.. infact much smaller.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Or take a Rune 2 handed. Wich is pretty cool too

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll try to fix that, I find it hard to do draw it out coz I don't know what the shape would be in that angle

I love that pose

:thumbsup: Nice. Welcome, grasshopper.... :P

welcome to the gallery echofish this is pretty sweet so far, I would just put more contrast in your shading though as some shades are hard to see and it doesn't give your character much depth.. Very nice style and pose, nothing to say about your anatomy.. I'll just try help it you have any problems through this. Goodluck with the face.

looks hawt :XD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

is it finished? i hope not

Ammy needs to look more circular.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But nice work anyway.

:thumbsup: Nice. Welcome, grasshopper.... :P

 

 

 

You didnt type in red!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It looks VERY good, as said before, the sword could be smaller. Here mouth and head can be anatomized aittle more... Looks very good though! =D>

Wow the pose is really good and the shading too. Ya overall good but the weapon way big.

 

:thumbsup: Nice. Welcome, grasshopper.... :P

 

 

 

You didnt type in red!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know.... mods say no... :cry:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I hope I may be able to again, one day though, which is a good thing I suppose. :thumbsup:

oh deary, you can't be the one in red anymore, fortress.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

back OT, it's always nice to get a new fresh view on pixeling. IMO that's a good mouth. She looks very nice at this point, just fix the lines. I can't wait to see the finished product.

I have no idea on how to do the sword >.< Thanks for the comments guys!

 

 

:thumbsup: Nice. Welcome, grasshopper.... :P

 

 

 

You didnt type in red!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know.... mods say no... :cry:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I hope I may be able to again, one day though, which is a good thing I suppose. :thumbsup:

 

 

 

thats so unfair....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway that drawings really gd cant wait for final pic

If the admins cared if you wrote in colour, then why did they add that attribute to the forums?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

One word for that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

LAME

One word for that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

LAME

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeyas for uber red!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it does look verry nice =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

some pointers tho =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

clean up the linework atm yours looks like:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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should be more like:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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it looks far better than way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

another thing is her hair at the back, it seams like its bending up towards the centerline of her skull, have it going no more that horizantal there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

pose it goos, skimmy looks good, could do wth a hilt mind...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

make the ammy more circular, atm its rectangular.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anatomy is very good, as are those vambs

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

looks very nice =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PJB21

very nice, though a few things. i think the neck is just a tad too long.

 

 

 

Also i think the shading on the shirt is a bit off, it looks to me almost like the way the light reflects its.. like porcelain or something. that's just my opinion though.

 

 

 

Very nice!

Nice pixel work, different than most styles, I guess because it's a bigger pic.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

About the full posts in color, it was not allowed anymore because some users abused it severely, don't spam this topic with off topic discussion please.

Fair enough.... (grr... :x )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, time for some on-topic things now. The neck look a little long to me. Maybe bring it down a little? Just looks like it doesn't fit a human.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, how about [bleep]y vambraces? You know, if you get the spines from the kebbits from hunting, then add them to normal vambraces, with a chisel I think, you get [bleep]y vambs. Much cooler. :thumbsup:

Fair enough.... (grr... :x )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, time for some on-topic things now. The neck look a little long to me. Maybe bring it down a little? Just looks like it doesn't fit a human.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, how about [bleep]y vambraces? You know, if you get the spines from the kebbits from hunting, then add them to normal vambraces, with a chisel I think, you get [bleep]y vambs. Much cooler. :thumbsup:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll try that, although I don't what it would looks like coz I'm not a member

Ah, I see.

omg new pixeler in town pl0x?

 

 

 

definitly, when i read the title, i thought you just copied your character and went into paint and outlined it, but its great :D#

 

 

 

there could be a bit more shading though, otherwise, its fantastic. Good job :D

ok my crits would be this..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

About her proportions I would say that her head is slightly too high, and her neck is too straight, usually necks curve out to the neck.. Look at her ear position, its way too low.. Her right eye needs to move a few pixels right, imagine if she was looking straight on, her right eye would be too far over imo..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Your linework could be made to look so much more smoother if you just took care where you place your pixels.. As for your palette you really need more contrast to add depth to your image, with your skin tones add more warmth to your darker shades by moving your colour selector slightly towards the red.. But I really love the posture and general design of this so far, I couldn't help making an edit :wall: its so hard to simply explain anything without showing someone what ya mean.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Make sure you've got a lightsource, it looks as if the lights coming from the left because of the highlights but the darker shades dont suggest the same.. Hope my edit shows how you could possible improve your character's face and general shading.. Didn't want to simply finish it off for you because all I really wanted to do is illustrate what I mean about contrast..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The additional smoothness is just added AA and dithering which I personally wouldn't be worried about, your doing great so far.. :thumbsup: