June 22, 200719 yr Well this is i would say my 3rd...4th Pixel and i don't know where to go from where i am. Rate it, slate it : 1/10 Well here it is:
June 22, 200719 yr That looks pretty nice. He looks a little stiff, but the shading for the metal is wonderful, but the fabric is lacking and could be done much better.
June 23, 200719 yr Add something inside the hemelt instead of blankness, right now he has now he has no face or eyes! I love it so far.
June 23, 200719 yr go for the mysterious style, like this picture i drew, make the helmet black, easier and i think it looks better than a face EDIT: the signature is an inside joke by the way Sig by me....
June 23, 200719 yr Pretty good! As said before, your shading on the metal is fantastic, and the shading on the fabric is not that great... Some other C/C: ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ The sword could use some improvements too, right now it looks very 2d. ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ His right lower arm (his right, our left) looks a little too thin (especially the wrist), or is it just me? :-k ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ I think the shading on the thing on his back (is it a shield?) could also use some improvement. (This is only a minor problem though.) But overall, great job, I'm pretty sure this turns out very good. :D pixel avvy by me deviantART
June 23, 200719 yr make the inside of the helmet black. looks great so far Hate is a strong word<3:need 130k willows for 99 fm, or 3 mil to buy them "sniff"
June 24, 200719 yr ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ His right lower arm (his right, our left) looks a little too thin (especially the wrist), or is it just me? :-k No, it's not just you, but I don't think that it is too thin, well it might be, but I think his forearm is too long is also part of the problem. Why should we buy postage stamps when we can make our own?aperson being
June 24, 200719 yr ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ His right lower arm (his right, our left) looks a little too thin (especially the wrist), or is it just me? :-k No, it's not just you, but I don't think that it is too thin, well it might be, but I think his forearm is too long is also part of the problem. Hmmm yes, you are right... :) pixel avvy by me deviantART
June 24, 200719 yr you need a setting when ur done with this can i use it :P Not all F2Pers are beggars or scammers, some are respected members, but these respected people are over-populated by these beggar and scammers.
June 24, 200719 yr Author Soz i have posted in a while, been on holiday, im working on the background/knight. I'll get back to you guys when i think it time for a sutible update. \
June 24, 200719 yr It's coming out good, you got the metal effect well (shiny). Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art
June 24, 200719 yr Like it so far, in my opinion you should get rid of black lines, atleast at the sword. Sword is also way too thin and a bit off coloured. It's coming out very nicely, but don't hurry now, best works come alongside of long hours of work. BTW: I think it would be fair if you mentioined you have used model there. 7/10 so far.
June 24, 200719 yr Add something inside the hemelt instead of blankness, right now he has now he has no face or eyes! I love it so far. I agree, make it black if you want, because it will look like one of those things in Lord Of The Rings (forgot their name :^o )
June 24, 200719 yr I love the colors...Normally I'd expect something like that to be colored badly, it's very nice to see that you didn't do that. It looks nice, but the blade is kinda crooked compared to its hilt....(hilt: |_| blade: /_/ well, something like that....maybe it's just me o.0) do u wow?Cassiius|Level 70 Night Elf Preist|RunetotemSambora|Level 37 Tauren Shaman|BurningLegion
June 24, 200719 yr I love the colors...Normally I'd expect something like that to be colored badly, it's very nice to see that you didn't do that. It looks nice, but the blade is kinda crooked compared to its hilt....(hilt: |_| blade: /_/ well, something like that....maybe it's just me o.0) No, its not just you... I see the blade is a little crooked to, other than that though, its nice. 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011.
June 24, 200719 yr omg you did that in paint?!?!? If you did it in paint 10/10 if you did it in any other program 7/10 Quote Quote Anyone who likes tacos is incapable of logic. Anyone who likes logic is incapable of tacos. PSA: SaqPrets is an Estonian Dude Steam: NippleBeardTM Origin: Brand_New_iPwn
June 25, 200719 yr preditor185....LOL! in december i printed that picture off and drew it! if my scanner was hooked up, my pic would own it... =S thats funny, i probably google searched a knight. cool. Im still fairly new to this so once i get everything figured out im posting all of my drawings and edited screenshots =) >>>-----\/\/̢̢̮ââ¬Ã¡ÃâÃÂ¬ÃÆÃ¢â¬Å¡Ãâç ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ \/\/ÃÆÃâÃâ¹ÃâL̢̮â¬Â âââ‰â¢--------->
June 25, 200719 yr looking at my pic i drew...the sword is much broader as well as his chest. My helms decorated more than yours but I think I did that myself...hm >>>-----\/\/̢̢̮ââ¬Ã¡ÃâÃÂ¬ÃÆÃ¢â¬Å¡Ãâç ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ \/\/ÃÆÃâÃâ¹ÃâL̢̮â¬Â âââ‰â¢--------->
June 25, 200719 yr Author omg you did that in paint?!?!? If you did it in paint 10/10 if you did it in any other program 7/10 100% Paint :lol:
June 27, 200719 yr It's really bugging me, that whilst the shading you've used might resemble metal, it doesn't define actual form that well. I think using more basic shading and refining and adding lots of white for the highlights would yield a better result. There is a lot of banding and excessive colours. Once again, I think shading with far less colours just to define the form and later adding more colours and detail if necessary would improve this. As noted, before, the forearms are too small, as are the shoulders and torso.
June 28, 200719 yr Obviously based off this render. http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/di ... ?pos=-2331 Coming out nice though. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
June 28, 200719 yr It's looking really good just a couple of ideas: Make the Orange Cloth Less Shiny. Add a Plume or something to the Helm. Make the Sword more Broad.
June 29, 200719 yr Very we'll done but he needs a face and maybe a longer wider sword which has more of a 3d look. 814 to 99 HunterTrimmed Hunter Cape: 99 CookingTotal Barrows Items: 53Total Barrows Earnings: 65,545,000gp
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