The glowing lines seem way too gimmicky in my opinion and the colours on them feel out of place on most of them as well. The only piece that it looks good/decent with is "Aquamarine" but is then ruined at the facial area duo to the bright light. I also like how you blended "Aquamarine" with the displacement filters (Correct me if I'm wrong), the blending done with a standard soft brush looks terrible though. Other than that I think it looks pretty good specially the darker colour scheme, which then is disturbed by the bright light, personally I think you should have kept it to be the more glowing blue similar to the end of the pentool. "Breakdance" is a good improvement from you, specially the colour scheme and tone. Texture was also incorporated neatly :thumbup: same goes with the text which totally rocks, perfect placement. Bars ruin it a bit though as they aren't in the same tone as the rest of the piece (It is on the lower left one though, but they still feel very random and ruins the flow) and the pentool line, totally different colour from the rest of the signature and isn't incorporated as efficiently as it could have been (I like the start though).