loaf2000 Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 heres a pixel sig iv'e been working on ... the mage is supposed to be alching something. It's not quite finished yet. comments and c/c welcome newest: pixel sig and avatar by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viktorkrum77 Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 I love the fountain. Me doing staff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dibsen Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 Love the realism you put into your pixel put the water squirting out of the fountain (even thoguh you probbally will) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiimben Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 Looking great, love the face. But the clothes (partly) spoil it. I would add more folds to give more realism. Maybe add some water to the fountain, and apart from that, it's looking good :) Good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rik Posted May 4, 2007 Share Posted May 4, 2007 great work on the shading and (mos) linework again. There is 1 thing i realy notice: The lines of the fountain and the bank are somehow different, but they need to be the same :? I think u have made the lowest lines of the bank going to a to high point.. sry for my bad english :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maelus Posted May 4, 2007 Share Posted May 4, 2007 Whoah, awesome work so far. Keep it up dude. ~Maelus ^^ Click sig for my blog!feel free to PM me in game if you need any help.RSN: Maelus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
specialcharacter Posted May 4, 2007 Share Posted May 4, 2007 Nothing i can really criticise, how long did this take you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaron1120 Posted May 4, 2007 Share Posted May 4, 2007 Wow, I love the fountain :shock: You made that look great! :D Anyone else have any other ideas? < | Runehead | Learning Java Programming, Please PM Me Tips | Signature by Loaf2000 | > Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loaf2000 Posted May 5, 2007 Author Share Posted May 5, 2007 Nothing i can really criticise, how long did this take you? I dont remember exactly how long because i started it a long time ago and stopped for a while. but it was a few hours. pixel sig and avatar by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runescapeloser22 Posted May 5, 2007 Share Posted May 5, 2007 The fountain and water is amazing :shock: I love most of it, although the guy looks way to old (too many wrinkles :lol: ) and his right hand (the one thats alching) is in an awkward position Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovelydude Posted May 5, 2007 Share Posted May 5, 2007 More contrast, and fix the lighting and perspective issues please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loaf2000 Posted May 5, 2007 Author Share Posted May 5, 2007 how should the perspective be? pixel sig and avatar by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talset65 Posted May 5, 2007 Share Posted May 5, 2007 Wow, that is truly amazing! The fountain.. It's spectacular :o Tough times don't last. Tough people do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hugger_88 Posted May 6, 2007 Share Posted May 6, 2007 ... I LOVE the fountain, I mean :o wow! His nostrils seem a bit wide though IMO, Nice sig, love the fountain! Fountain 10/10 already ;) Yea, Im back ;) - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted May 6, 2007 Share Posted May 6, 2007 your perspectives are definately off.. its confusing because from judging on the building you'd expect the horizon to be much higher like this.. (only rough) I personally like your horizon line as it is, the background really makes this piece atm. To draw it all together I'd personally have your objects on the same angle as your perspective, which would mean altering the fountain quite a bit and changing the side wall of the building. But it looks like you've worked a lot into the fountain, and it would be extremly messy trying to fix it, so my advice would be to maybe, judge where the horizon would be from looking at the fountain, and dropping everything to suit.. Just an idea. good job so far. oh also the building looks very fake, please take the time to look at some references. You should really work on perspective issues, anatomy, positioning way before detailing anything.. because once you start it becomes harder and harder to go back to the initial stages. ~Ter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovelydude Posted May 6, 2007 Share Posted May 6, 2007 PMG :D I was just about to spend fifteen minutes trying to deal with your perspective problems and Ter already does it! =D> Way better than I would have You still will need to work on your contrast, it feels like the guy's on a movie set, or something. I'm going to say this, and I know everyone hates hearing it. The whole piece seems a bit empty. It's like there's a guy who resembles Santa, and for some reason there's a tree, fountain, bank and mountains in the background behind him. No cohesion it seems. I think you should add people or things interacting with the background. EDIT: I think you could keep the mountains where they are, but make sure to drop everything else so that it complies with the fountain's perspective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mindstormer398 Posted May 6, 2007 Share Posted May 6, 2007 Amazing job so far, I love the fountain expecially, but there are two things I see: 1. The alch spell itself seems really rigid around the edges; I think it needs to be larger and more faded away. 2. The bank's bricks are way too cubic and perfect(especially the near corner); remember that there's no laser-cut bricks in RS. EDIT: one more thing, the tree needs a shadow too. +-------------------------+| . . . . Pure F2P . . . .|+-------------------------+| || 73 74 73 75 70 86 65 80 || || 85 80 80 80 80 80 80 65 |+-------------------------+| Combat: 092 Total: 1235 |+-------------------------+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captainkidd Posted May 6, 2007 Share Posted May 6, 2007 :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: Holy.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeonardMart Posted May 6, 2007 Share Posted May 6, 2007 that tree "shadow" should be dark, not the same color as the rest of the grass... Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loaf2000 Posted May 8, 2007 Author Share Posted May 8, 2007 I went with the horizon I have and re-did the fountain and brick wall. bump... pixel sig and avatar by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rik Posted May 8, 2007 Share Posted May 8, 2007 In the newest version the shadow unther the tree comes out realy. U can see right awey how many dark colors are used: 2/3. Use less fromt he darkest colors and a bit more of the middletones :wink: Also: The brick wall looks better, but make the front wall like you did on the side one. I would have been a bit more specific if i knew the right english words :XD: :anxious: sry for that :( Goodluck with the pixel : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loaf2000 Posted May 9, 2007 Author Share Posted May 9, 2007 I finished all the bricks. pixel sig and avatar by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaron1120 Posted May 10, 2007 Share Posted May 10, 2007 I think it looks really cool now. The only other thing I can think of now is to create a roof, because you can see top of the building now. < | Runehead | Learning Java Programming, Please PM Me Tips | Signature by Loaf2000 | > Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magma_Surge Posted May 11, 2007 Share Posted May 11, 2007 i love it all, great colors, one tiny thing is that you may want to consider making the gold "alching light" a little larger M<><><><><>E<><><><>G<><><>R<><><><><><>A<>S<><> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted May 11, 2007 Share Posted May 11, 2007 More contrast would be nice, more contrast in all of your work would be nice...Alright pixle other than that, I suppose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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