preditor185 Posted June 22, 2007 Share Posted June 22, 2007 Well this is i would say my 3rd...4th Pixel and i don't know where to go from where i am. Rate it, slate it : 1/10 Well here it is: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxxShade Posted June 22, 2007 Share Posted June 22, 2007 That looks pretty nice. He looks a little stiff, but the shading for the metal is wonderful, but the fabric is lacking and could be done much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dave0293 Posted June 23, 2007 Share Posted June 23, 2007 Add something inside the hemelt instead of blankness, right now he has now he has no face or eyes! I love it so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted June 23, 2007 Share Posted June 23, 2007 go for the mysterious style, like this picture i drew, make the helmet black, easier and i think it looks better than a face EDIT: the signature is an inside joke by the way Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted June 23, 2007 Share Posted June 23, 2007 Pretty good! As said before, your shading on the metal is fantastic, and the shading on the fabric is not that great... Some other C/C: ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ The sword could use some improvements too, right now it looks very 2d. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ His right lower arm (his right, our left) looks a little too thin (especially the wrist), or is it just me? :-k ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ I think the shading on the thing on his back (is it a shield?) could also use some improvement. (This is only a minor problem though.) But overall, great job, I'm pretty sure this turns out very good. :D pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsavi Posted June 23, 2007 Share Posted June 23, 2007 I think you should put something for a face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D3M0NX Posted June 23, 2007 Share Posted June 23, 2007 make the inside of the helmet black. looks great so far Hate is a strong word<3:need 130k willows for 99 fm, or 3 mil to buy them "sniff" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jepa69 Posted June 23, 2007 Share Posted June 23, 2007 me likehs it At the moment i can't really see the full form of the muffin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APERSON Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ His right lower arm (his right, our left) looks a little too thin (especially the wrist), or is it just me? :-k No, it's not just you, but I don't think that it is too thin, well it might be, but I think his forearm is too long is also part of the problem. Why should we buy postage stamps when we can make our own?aperson being Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ His right lower arm (his right, our left) looks a little too thin (especially the wrist), or is it just me? :-k No, it's not just you, but I don't think that it is too thin, well it might be, but I think his forearm is too long is also part of the problem. Hmmm yes, you are right... :) pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primeaction Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 you need a setting when ur done with this can i use it :P Not all F2Pers are beggars or scammers, some are respected members, but these respected people are over-populated by these beggar and scammers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
preditor185 Posted June 24, 2007 Author Share Posted June 24, 2007 Soz i have posted in a while, been on holiday, im working on the background/knight. I'll get back to you guys when i think it time for a sutible update. \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 It's coming out good, you got the metal effect well (shiny). Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Syd Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 Like it so far, in my opinion you should get rid of black lines, atleast at the sword. Sword is also way too thin and a bit off coloured. It's coming out very nicely, but don't hurry now, best works come alongside of long hours of work. BTW: I think it would be fair if you mentioined you have used model there. 7/10 so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalTalker Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 Add something inside the hemelt instead of blankness, right now he has now he has no face or eyes! I love it so far. I agree, make it black if you want, because it will look like one of those things in Lord Of The Rings (forgot their name :^o ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroi_Ame Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 I love the colors...Normally I'd expect something like that to be colored badly, it's very nice to see that you didn't do that. It looks nice, but the blade is kinda crooked compared to its hilt....(hilt: |_| blade: /_/ well, something like that....maybe it's just me o.0) do u wow?Cassiius|Level 70 Night Elf Preist|RunetotemSambora|Level 37 Tauren Shaman|BurningLegion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
My_Eggs Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 I love the colors...Normally I'd expect something like that to be colored badly, it's very nice to see that you didn't do that. It looks nice, but the blade is kinda crooked compared to its hilt....(hilt: |_| blade: /_/ well, something like that....maybe it's just me o.0) No, its not just you... I see the blade is a little crooked to, other than that though, its nice. 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RpgGamer Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 omg you did that in paint?!?!? If you did it in paint 10/10 if you did it in any other program 7/10 Quote Quote Anyone who likes tacos is incapable of logic. Anyone who likes logic is incapable of tacos. PSA: SaqPrets is an Estonian Dude Steam: NippleBeardTM Origin: Brand_New_iPwn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wes_wolf Posted June 25, 2007 Share Posted June 25, 2007 preditor185....LOL! in december i printed that picture off and drew it! if my scanner was hooked up, my pic would own it... =S thats funny, i probably google searched a knight. cool. Im still fairly new to this so once i get everything figured out im posting all of my drawings and edited screenshots =) >>>-----\/\/ÃÆââââ¬Ã¡ÃâìÃÆââ¬Å¡Ãâç ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ \/\/ÃÆÃâÃâ¹ÃâLÃÆââ¬Â âââ‰â¢---------> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wes_wolf Posted June 25, 2007 Share Posted June 25, 2007 looking at my pic i drew...the sword is much broader as well as his chest. My helms decorated more than yours but I think I did that myself...hm >>>-----\/\/ÃÆââââ¬Ã¡ÃâìÃÆââ¬Å¡Ãâç ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ \/\/ÃÆÃâÃâ¹ÃâLÃÆââ¬Â âââ‰â¢---------> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
preditor185 Posted June 25, 2007 Author Share Posted June 25, 2007 omg you did that in paint?!?!? If you did it in paint 10/10 if you did it in any other program 7/10 100% Paint :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovelydude Posted June 27, 2007 Share Posted June 27, 2007 It's really bugging me, that whilst the shading you've used might resemble metal, it doesn't define actual form that well. I think using more basic shading and refining and adding lots of white for the highlights would yield a better result. There is a lot of banding and excessive colours. Once again, I think shading with far less colours just to define the form and later adding more colours and detail if necessary would improve this. As noted, before, the forearms are too small, as are the shoulders and torso. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted June 28, 2007 Share Posted June 28, 2007 Obviously based off this render. http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/di ... ?pos=-2331 Coming out nice though. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lakitsym_Rose Posted June 28, 2007 Share Posted June 28, 2007 It's looking really good just a couple of ideas: Make the Orange Cloth Less Shiny. Add a Plume or something to the Helm. Make the Sword more Broad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool75155 Posted June 29, 2007 Share Posted June 29, 2007 Very we'll done but he needs a face and maybe a longer wider sword which has more of a 3d look. 814 to 99 HunterTrimmed Hunter Cape: 99 CookingTotal Barrows Items: 53Total Barrows Earnings: 65,545,000gp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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