Lovelydude <3 I think it's good for a start, I like the shading you've managed on the sword, and the detail in the background is pretty good, for your 5th. I think this is pretty good for a fifth pixel, but a little more shading in some areas, the church, lava, etc. And maybe make it more relaxed, try using Lovelydude's scribbling, colour it, shade it, give it some texture and depth if you can, and post it here, we'll see how well you've improved from the tips ^_^