Aussie_King

8/10, 9/10, 10/10. That eye is amazing, very well done.

Size: 250x90 Style (smooth/grudge/smudge): Like the 3rd one. Render or stock: http://planetrenders.net/renders/displa ... pos=-24542 Colours: B&W Text: Fused Other information: Make it cool or I'll eat your family.

I like them both, 8.5/10

LOVE the new smoother version. I think you've done well. 9/10

I see, fair enough. The way to make it dhide is to add those scales. Try a really light grey center, and just make the grey a little darker and make layers until you make it look like a tear drop. Do this all over the d hide and it should look ok. If not, I'm sure someone will help you make them look better.

It's better, than before anyways. I like it so far. No real crits.. Just keep working on it.

To add onto what yaff said, try adding the arrowheads, at the moment all we can see is the yellow things on the bow.

Bah, the first one is halarious and the third one is good too, but I love the first one :P

I might nick that one. Put Matt on it thanks :D Btw for CC I think you've blended it in a little too much and thats could have been done better but I've got a forum that suits it's darkness. So I'll have it :P

Wow I love it! Although there are a few bits that could use a bit more shading and such, but I really like the result, I like the simpleness of some of it, where detail isn't really used, it gives a nice look. Well done, 9/10

Much better work on the santa one, the colours blend well, the render is clean, the text is good, the blending is going somewhere, it's all going upwards for you.

Lookin' good so far, but some more shading and it'll look great (I like shading if you hadn't noticed)

I like your new one, but you can get way better. try blending in the dam render :P but I like your third one, it's great.

Edited. Runemetsa can do it if he wants :P

Lookin good. Keep working on it and I'll boss you around and tell you what to do later :P

Nice. Good day to you, sir.

Immensely good for second. Try removing some of those black lines and fix up the lightsaber, make it smooth and give it a glow. Other than that, fix up the eclipse like someone already said and it should be great. Also a little work on anatomy would be good.

NVM

Woosh, it's a start. The first one is atleast shaded, it almost looks cartoonish, which imo looks really good, but on the pixel artist side, it's quite rubbish. BUT since it is your first/second/third, it is good. You've attempted to shade and that's a start, but keep trying to give the shading layers, and shade more of it. Perhaps try getting some detail into some of them, like make the background have more going on, and maybe on the second one, less clouds and make the colour darker, and definately shade it. Look up some tuts for some info on shading, detailing, dithering, technique and definately ANATOMY! You really have to work on that. But really, keep making them, you will improve and I'd like to see you improve. These are my tips: For number one: Read guides on anatomy, it's one of your main drawbacks and fails. Sorry to say, your shading really isn't that great. Try having layers or levels of shading, and try to make them smoothly blend. And have more detail in what's going on in the background. Try some more people, and maybe a fight in the background. But definately look at some anatomy guides. For number two: Wow. Indeed. I'm sorry to say everything is horrible. But alteast you've attmempted on the coins. Perhaps a darker coin colour, and don't make it look like it's just a 2D pile of yellow crap :P Perhaps make it look a bit more 3d. You've done a little better on the anatomy on the second one than you did on the first one, but her skirt makes her look fat. lol. And the clouds are disgusting, they look like mickey mouses on a blue background. Try a darker colour, and definately some shading on the sky and GET RID OF SOME OF THOSE CLOUDS and make them lighter, and transparent. Make them smooth and not big blotches of white on a picture. And the tree... If that's a magic tree, try making the bark a bit textured and shaded, and try to put more "magic" on the tree. BTW, magic trees have stars on them, so try changing the odd tadpole-looking shapes into stars. The ground is weird, perhaps get rid of the brown and make a farming patch around the tree, it would look good, and make the rest green. Also, make the ground look like it's not attached to the ground lol. Sorry i've rambled on too much about the second one, I'll go onto the third. For the third one. Like on the first one, try to detatch the sky from the ground, with some mountains or soemthing. The moon looks good, but maybe a tiny bit of detail on it would be nice. Fix the ancient staff, it's all wrong. The robes look lame and fat, try fixing them, again, antomy ain't so good. The pick needs to be curved around a bit more, and the d hide needs to be more than a one-peice black thing with white spots on it. The ground is ok, but try some mountains in the background and some shine on those stars and it might look good. Sorry if I've come off as a jerk in any of this and I hope to see you improve in the near future!

I like the smallness, but the blending is an issue. But, I like the BE one, though could be a little less shiny, but I guess that's how it's supposed to look. The dragon one has some very cool depth, but the dark bit looks a bit boring. The assassin's creed one is nice with the light peeling down from the top, and I like the sort of frost effect of your brushes in the background. I like all three, and hope to see more from you!

what do you mean by that Well I mean it looks a bit dull.. It could look better is what I'm saying. Don't take that away from the good sig though.

Size: 350x100 Render / Stock: http://www.wwe.com/content/media/images ... io/4751238 http://content.answers.com/main/content ... htbelt.jpg Text: Matt Sub-text: Tjscape Mod RM or happy: Either, whichever has less on their plate. I like both of your art. Anything Else: Make it friggin cool :P Dark colours, black, blue, maybe red or green.

I LOVE IT! It looks really good. No real crits but the hair looks a little ordinary.

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[offtopic]BLOODRED! I haven't seen you in ages! How's it been.. I can't believe you're still around..[/offtopic] Sorry for the off topic.. Uhh.. I like the entries so far?