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  1. I think all children should be taught or at least encouraged, to question. Otherwise you could basically believe in anything someone told you, and I don't hold that as a 'good' thing. If you never made any beliefs or choices for yourself, who's life are you living? Not yours.
  2. Both, I'm not bothered if I don't get presents but it's always fun! :D But I think I prefer giving. Choosing presents or making them is so much fun, and to add to that, see their faces when they find it's something they really wanted.
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    Poetry

    Wow! Loved it, it flows well and each line seems to fit in with the others. The description seems sophisticated and mature and there is also another message with you can't really put into words but is very nice! The ryhmes also add a really nice touch. Well done. =D>
  4. Hugh Grant Mark Rampakash(not sure if he counts as a celebrity...) Antonio Banderas Orlando Bloom From a totally straight point of view, I think Kiera Knightley and Juliette Binoche are both very good-looking. (And as someone else said, Emma Watson, when she's not playing Hermione)
  5. written by friendof issy's i love your poem it is so passionately written wth the most fantastic word choices. The rhymes are smooth and work well with the general feel of the poem, great subject great style well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! one suggestion-tears well in his eyes perhaps?????
  6. written by a friend of Issy's whilst she was in the shower I think that . your poem is really good overall. In some places you might want to work on the rhymes,but overall fantastic. you can really tell how passionate you are about the subject. POSSIBLE-climactic ending?????????? WRITTEN BY ISSY AS AN EDIT- WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT 1,000TH POST WRITTEN BY ONE OF MY BESTEST MATES WHAT A COINCIDENCE!!!!!!!! WOOOOHOOO!!!!
  7. I've alays viewed myself as being sociable but very independant. I tend to think I am good at writing and dancing but that's it in terms of good stuff. I am friendly and bubbly (hope so anyway) and i ca n safley say I hate my mums laptop because it is so hard to type with and i can't be bothered to correct numerious mistakes. My friend who is here with me says about me - She is a fiery headed nutter with a temper like a stick of dynamite and as much patiience as a king cobra. But i love her because she is one the sweetest most funniest and wittiest people i have ever met and she is definitely one my best most closest friends, even though she can sometimes be head strong i genuinely think she is an amazing person. i love her to bits!
  8. 1. You are prejudiced. 2. I get the feeling you didn't understand my wholeheartedly intelligent post in the hope that you piece of 'writing' which you 'spent like 5 minutes' on would be just marginally improved by several comments a caring member of the forum left with YOUR best interests at heart. 3. Your post is clearly a frustrated attempt at answering my constructive criticisms rather than you trying to improve it you neglect to thank me for wasting my time on your poem. 4. written by a friend WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM???? to be perfectly frank your poem sucks and your response to helpful advice is childish and unworthy of the greatness of Varrock Library. 5. I suggest you grow up a bit before wasting your above mentioned 'childish comments' on this forum. Thankyou and goodbye, that's if you read this which I hope you did because it might benefit not only your literature but your IQ.
  9. It shows. Honestly, don't bother wasting a thread if you haven't put any effort into it. Rhythm non-existant, doesn't flow, it seems like each line is supposed to be somewhere else like you just thought it off the top of your head. Some of the words and phrases don't seem to fit. Rhyme isn't necessary but it would work well. There's literally no description except 'beautifully soft'. I wouldn't exactly call leather that, but fine, and since when has leather been delicate? And plus she might not just wander back to the farming. It might work better for Millie to be more ambitious. To add to that the name 'Millie' isn't exactly awe-inspiring. (No offence to anyone called Millie.) A name is something that needs to be chosen carefully, because it has a huge impact on the whole atmosphere of any piece of writing. Edit - just noticed, did you mean 'grinding' her flour? :)
  10. Pro Latin/ballroom dancer, author, or something less ambitious, like a general practitioner. But considering the amount of work you'd have to do in medical school...
  11. You don't have to agree to avoid an argument. You can still state your own reasons, even if you disagree with a point or whatever, without it being followed by abuse and flaming. If you disagree, you should argue/debate. That is kind of the point. You can state your reasons, but if you cannot defend them against someone who thinks differently no one cares about your opinion. Who says you can't state your reasons without flaming? Arguing and flaming don't walk hand in hand. I just don't understand why a point can't be made with reasons for your opinion, but without unnecessary criticisms and flaming.
  12. I agree, an argument between several people is often extremely entertaining, and I disagree with Shadow - I see no reason why arguments should be kept inside one thread AS LONG AS it is executed in a friendly, calm manner. You don't have to agree to avoid an argument. You can still state your own reasons, even if you disagree with a point or whatever, without it being followed by abuse and flaming.
  13. No, I asked my dad for a word referring to 'civil' in the correct context, he suggested 'civilary' and several others. Does it really matter? I never said I meant chivarly. I was referring to being civil the whole time...
  14. Well, you were clearly wrong, as I was talking about being 'civil' rather than 'chivilarous.'
  15. Chivalry? It's being civil, basic manners, even if you don't respect someone, it's no reason to treat them like dirt. (Unless you have a very good reason)
  16. 'Respect is earnt, but basic civilary is a must.'
  17. As in boards - Art Bazaar (only when I need something making) Varrock Library Off Topic And forums - THE most amazing forum EVER. JOIN UP NOW.
  18. I really liked it! A few things you could change in the first few paragraphs (tiptoes is one word, you repeat the word 'bed' alot, 12.05 seems a bit of a conicidental time, why not make it 12 or 1?) but otherwise I really enjoyed it, and I was left wanting to read more. Maybe you could describe Dagegr a bit more (personally I've never played FF so I've no idea who everyone is) I like the implicitness of the last few paragraphs and it's ended really nicely. =D> =D>
  19. As in, physically sick, I've done so about 3 times in the last two months. And I hardly ever get sick during the winter, weird because I always get a cold in late spring/early summer.
  20. I'm trying right now to type without looking at the keyboard, I tried a wekk-long course in August. so I hope I'm doing well.
  21. I think this as been the hardest one that i have ever done your really pushing my skills. http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/1346/wowvc4.jpg dont know if its too big let me know WOWW YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thankyou soooo much!!!! Well done too, it is an amazing pic!!!! :D :D :D :D =D> =D> =D> =D>
  22. I fail to understand why loving everything makes love any less valuable. I don't see any reason why loving everything makes love less "special." How does this happen? If you love everything, then love means nothing. It would therefore be just like likeing everything. It's only special when it refers to a few things. Which makes those few things above average, because you love them, or cherish them more. Since when is love restricted by number? Surely love's essence, what it is, does not change just because you love everything. But it's not love if you love everything. Because then there is no emotion for hate or like. Which makes love the only emotion, so it is impossible to go beyond the normal emotion which is love in this case. Basically what I'm trying to get across is... well what Viktor said. If love is the only emotion, it's not special anymore. Can you imagine loving every sport you did? They'd all be the same.
  23. Hi, I'm just interested in your favourite annual celebration, be it Easter, Chinese New Year, your birthday, or an anniversary. There'll probablyl be many religious celebrations so please say what they're for, if they're less wellknown, and what you do then. My favourite is New Year, because I love that suspense when a house packed full of family and friends starts counting down to midnight. I like staying up late and seeing family but more than that, I like when you know there's a new year coming, somewhere you've never been before, and you never know what good things and bad things it will bring, and how you will react to them. I usually stay at home or go to a friends house, there's always a big eve party in my groups of friends. I also kind of like Christmas, because there is a really united feeling everywhere, even though not everyone celebrates it! I love getting the tree, decorating the house, and seeing my family. I usually go to my auntie's house, or my cousins come here. Whichever, I'm happy. :thumbsup:
  24. I write and dance, enjoy both alot. :thumbsup:
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